Haiku(cascading thunder)
Haiku33 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Sugarray!
First of I hope you are okay .. I miss your poetry.
I love the sound of water. When it s a peaceful stream it s soothing when it s a cascading thunder it thrills me.
Beautiful art choice.
The pitter patter sound instead makes me dreamy.
When I was age 13 at my boarding school in Montreux, a musician came to play music with crystal glasses.
Each glass was filled with a different amount of water that way each glass made a different sound when he moved the tips of his fingers around the rims.
The sound / songs he composed were beautiful.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Ciao Sugarray!
First of I hope you are okay .. I miss your poetry.
I love the sound of water. When it s a peaceful stream it s soothing when it s a cascading thunder it thrills me.
Beautiful art choice.
The pitter patter sound instead makes me dreamy.
When I was age 13 at my boarding school in Montreux, a musician came to play music with crystal glasses.
Each glass was filled with a different amount of water that way each glass made a different sound when he moved the tips of his fingers around the rims.
The sound / songs he composed were beautiful.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Hello sweet Franca. Thank you for your wonderful review. I have been so distracted by Life that I haven't felt like writing poetry, but I will pick up my pen again very soon. I also love to hear the music that can be made when water is in the glasses... like you said, it sounds dreamy. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
Melissa,
This is true of waterfalls. They are the loud natural sound flowing water makes. Though some waves can be loud too.
Nice artwork accompanying the poem.
Congratulations on the milestone post.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Melissa,
This is true of waterfalls. They are the loud natural sound flowing water makes. Though some waves can be loud too.
Nice artwork accompanying the poem.
Congratulations on the milestone post.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Joan. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
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You are most kindly welcome, Melissa. I share you love for waterfalls. I don?t
think length matters as long as the quality is there.
Joan
Comment from Debbie Pope
This haiku deserves a six star rating because of the first two lines. I like how you combine the senses of hearing and sight. Your sounds flow like water. You create such an unexpected image.
Your poem is artfully crafted and unique. I loved it.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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This haiku deserves a six star rating because of the first two lines. I like how you combine the senses of hearing and sight. Your sounds flow like water. You create such an unexpected image.
Your poem is artfully crafted and unique. I loved it.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Hello Debbie. Thank you. Haikus can be a real challenge for me as I wrestle with word placement and that satori that needs to be an 'aha' moment. Thank you, sweet friend, for your lovely review.
Melissa
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your haiku contest entry is in great form, Melissa.
I enjoyed reading it. The image is beautiful, though
your words paint a great picture for readers.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Your haiku contest entry is in great form, Melissa.
I enjoyed reading it. The image is beautiful, though
your words paint a great picture for readers.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Jan. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Marienkiefer
This is a wonderful haiku, nicely crafted.
-Beautiful sound and imagery.
-Like a waterfall symphony
-Incites readers to ponder and reflect
Great work
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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This is a wonderful haiku, nicely crafted.
-Beautiful sound and imagery.
-Like a waterfall symphony
-Incites readers to ponder and reflect
Great work
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Marien. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from kahpot
Waterfalls are mesmerizing and the sound is very soothing, an excellent haiku, love the "song of water" as falls, rapids, and waves all have unique sounds, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Waterfalls are mesmerizing and the sound is very soothing, an excellent haiku, love the "song of water" as falls, rapids, and waves all have unique sounds, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Joan. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congrats on your 1000th post Melissa. I love the sound of running water as long it is not a leaking tap! I used to have a CD of waterfalls which I found soothing, a fine Haiku, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Congrats on your 1000th post Melissa. I love the sound of running water as long it is not a leaking tap! I used to have a CD of waterfalls which I found soothing, a fine Haiku, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Dolly. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your milestone post! I really enjoyed this poem. The picture you selected to accompany the piece works well. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Congratulations on your milestone post! I really enjoyed this poem. The picture you selected to accompany the piece works well. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Jess. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
Beautiful artwork choice. Congratulations on your artwork choice. It looks very dynamic, with the cascading water. Congrats on your 1000th post. I have 170 more to go before I reach mine! "Cascading thunder" is a great description. It leads beautiful third line that it is the song of water. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Beautiful artwork choice. Congratulations on your artwork choice. It looks very dynamic, with the cascading water. Congrats on your 1000th post. I have 170 more to go before I reach mine! "Cascading thunder" is a great description. It leads beautiful third line that it is the song of water. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Judi. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
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You're very welcome. Have a great Sunday. judi
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
This is a fine and evocative short poem. I especially like the use of the word mesmerizing and the final line. A fantastic photo illustration too. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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This is a fine and evocative short poem. I especially like the use of the word mesmerizing and the final line. A fantastic photo illustration too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
