Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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35 total reviews
Comment from Lilly Flowers
I would be amazed too. You did a wonderful job with this poem. The rhythm and the rhyme kept me captivated as well as the subject matter. A job well done. Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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I would be amazed too. You did a wonderful job with this poem. The rhythm and the rhyme kept me captivated as well as the subject matter. A job well done. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind words, Jim
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing. Teri
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing. Teri
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Teri 7, Thank you for your strong validation of my Empat Empat poem. 🙏🙏🎶🎶🎶
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I am new to FanStory after a three-year hiatus, so I am also new to all these great forms of poetry. This creation of yours is quite beautiful--very vivid in its imagery and flowing with its words. I enjoyed reading it very much!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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I am new to FanStory after a three-year hiatus, so I am also new to all these great forms of poetry. This creation of yours is quite beautiful--very vivid in its imagery and flowing with its words. I enjoyed reading it very much!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Rachelle, welcome back! I am honored to receive your review and comments. I will look forward to seeing what you share. 🙏🙏👍👍
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1.) You're totally welcome and
2.) Please! I always loved your feedback and candor! xo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully written in an appealing style and vividly descriptive of the power of nature to hold gazers spellbound. "Church" is a great metaphor for this scene in nature, for God created it all.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Your poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully written in an appealing style and vividly descriptive of the power of nature to hold gazers spellbound. "Church" is a great metaphor for this scene in nature, for God created it all.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Janice, thank you for your strong validation of this Empat Empat poem. I could not agree with you more about God's canvas on nature.
Comment from Sanku
This is a very sweet poem,a verbal painting of a panorama seen from atop a bluff. As the poet stood absorbed in the scenery two fawn appeared ''what a perfect conclusion!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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This is a very sweet poem,a verbal painting of a panorama seen from atop a bluff. As the poet stood absorbed in the scenery two fawn appeared ''what a perfect conclusion!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Sanku, thank you for your validation of this Empat Empat poem.
Comment from jaded831
You weaved together a beautiful poem. Nature is God's handiwork and deserves all our love and admiration. Your poem reflects this and more. I believe life is our church and it's natural beauty our alter and creates within us the power of prayer.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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You weaved together a beautiful poem. Nature is God's handiwork and deserves all our love and admiration. Your poem reflects this and more. I believe life is our church and it's natural beauty our alter and creates within us the power of prayer.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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jaded831: thank you for your validation of this Empat Empat poem. I could not agree with you more about God's canvas on nature. 🙏🙏
Comment from MissMerri
This is a truly beautiful poem that creates a clearly visible scene of nature's amazing beauty. I think the repeating line is absolutely perfect. It seems to tie all the verses neatly together and is a line that bears repeating. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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This is a truly beautiful poem that creates a clearly visible scene of nature's amazing beauty. I think the repeating line is absolutely perfect. It seems to tie all the verses neatly together and is a line that bears repeating. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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MissMeri, thank you for your validation of this Empat Empat poem.
Comment from Aussie
I enjoyed your ultra-feelgood poem. Some say there is no God. You have praised Him with your beautiful words and the photo of twin fawns is absolutely amazing. With god there is no fear. Stand watching, wind catching, animals not afraid. K xx
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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I enjoyed your ultra-feelgood poem. Some say there is no God. You have praised Him with your beautiful words and the photo of twin fawns is absolutely amazing. With god there is no fear. Stand watching, wind catching, animals not afraid. K xx
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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K, thank you for your validation of this Empat Empat poem. Yes, in my world there is a God that makes all things of nature just a bit more pure. 🙏🙏
Comment from karenina
Love the staircase refrain line. You tucked it in gently in each stanza, without a forced feel to it...
Nature is the most sublime testament to faith, and so your "perfect church" phrase is stunning.
Karenina
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Love the staircase refrain line. You tucked it in gently in each stanza, without a forced feel to it...
Nature is the most sublime testament to faith, and so your "perfect church" phrase is stunning.
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Karenina, thank you for your validation of this Empat Empat poem. Yes, in my world there is a God that makes all things of nature just a bit more pure. 🙏🙏
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Perhaps it's my Algonquin blood...but nature speaks spirituality to me, always!
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Those 46 peaks in the Adirondacks rival the Blue Ridge Mountains in point in the world for certain!
Comment from godlucifer
i remember as a five year old living in iowa. i remember playing in the fields and being surrounded by nature. i remember the amazement,winds,and breeze. your poem was well define and well written. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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i remember as a five year old living in iowa. i remember playing in the fields and being surrounded by nature. i remember the amazement,winds,and breeze. your poem was well define and well written. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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godlucifer...thank you for your validation of this Empat Empat poem. IN my world nature just makes things more pure.
