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The Monkey Show

My first time to see a monkey.

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Comment from royowen
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That sounds so nice, I must admit with all the entertainment I've seen in my life I've never seen a performing monkey. It sounded really nice being at you grandparent's place, beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
    Thank you Roy, It was very special to a little girl back then. Children today need more to entertain them. Monkeys are fun to watch even when they aren't performing.
    Beth
reply by royowen on 14-Jul-2022
    Absolutely
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this adorable memory with us. I enjoyed reading this writing prompt entry. Life was simple and enjoyable back in the day. We need to return to those times.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
    Thank you Barbara. I feel blessed to have grown up at a time when something like that was such a special treat. It a different world today.
    Beth
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That was such a lovely story, Beth, a beautiful, lasting memory of the time you walked to town with your grandparents to see the monkey. Bless it. It must have been absolutely thrilling sitting there watching. Lovely, my friend, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
    Thank you Sandra, It wouldn't thrill a child of today who craves more sophisticated entertainment but it was thrilling in that day and age. I'm glad I grew in in simple times. I have a feeling even my grandparents were entertained, if not by the monkey, by my reaction to him.
    Beth
Comment from Raul1
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This monkey sure did put on a show to the public but he wanted to shoot Hitler with his gun. A very funny story with some dark humor. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
    Thank ;you Raul. I appreciate the review and I'm glad you found the bit of dark humor. I'm glad you liked it.
    Beth
reply by Raul1 on 14-Jul-2022
    You're welcome!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Great story for the contest. A very unique and out-of-the-ordinary outing! I loved the monkey and the centerpiece of the story and your excitement. It rang true as a childhood story.

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 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
    Thank you Ted, It would not be something a child of this day and time would get excited about but that was another time and another place. I appreciate the great review.
    Beth
Comment from lyenochka
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You really had a unique childhood! I am glad you didn't have all the distractions of television or even the those of a busy city life. Instead, seeing this monkey show was such a delight and kept you fascinated.
Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
    I don't know if it was unique for the day or for living in rural Mississippi but it was far different from the childhood children have today. I'm thankful I grew up the way I did. Thank you so much for the nice review."
    Beth