Haiku for Summer Day
Haiku 5-7-5 syllable 3 line format15 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Welcome back to FanStory.
You have drawn a vivid mental picture of your weeping willow in the height of summer, as an expressive tree. Much enjoyed. Kate xx
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Welcome back to FanStory.
You have drawn a vivid mental picture of your weeping willow in the height of summer, as an expressive tree. Much enjoyed. Kate xx
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much for your nice review.
Comment from Scott Rhodie
Very enjoyable piece of writing. Nice viewpoint and can see how this poem ties in and feels lovely in terms of the economy. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Very enjoyable piece of writing. Nice viewpoint and can see how this poem ties in and feels lovely in terms of the economy. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you much for reviewing.
Comment from royowen
I think creation is a huge metaphor, God's voice is silent to the one who doubts, and a very loud voice to the those who listen and hear, beautifully written Cristie, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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I think creation is a huge metaphor, God's voice is silent to the one who doubts, and a very loud voice to the those who listen and hear, beautifully written Cristie, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your very kind review. And what an interesting insight.
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Good job,
Comment from Fleedleflump
It does look a little like it's trying to tap you on the shoulder and going 'Psst!' I love 'drips over' - perfect choice of descriptor :-). I wonder if all plants have knowledge they may want to share, of only they had more faculties!
Mike
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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It does look a little like it's trying to tap you on the shoulder and going 'Psst!' I love 'drips over' - perfect choice of descriptor :-). I wonder if all plants have knowledge they may want to share, of only they had more faculties!
Mike
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you much for your kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely haiku! I was told I shouldn't personify in haiku but I have seen others who do so I like it as it brings the willow to life. I like the liquid allusions of "drips" and "honeyed." Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Lovely haiku! I was told I shouldn't personify in haiku but I have seen others who do so I like it as it brings the willow to life. I like the liquid allusions of "drips" and "honeyed." Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your nice review.
