Haiku for Summer Day
Haiku 5-7-5 syllable 3 line format15 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
This 3-liner is gorgeous! I loved the artwork, and your words bring everything together in a subtle way. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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This 3-liner is gorgeous! I loved the artwork, and your words bring everything together in a subtle way. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your super nice review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Nice poem for the contest. I love the picture that accompanies the poem. I also love the image of a weeping willow (one of my favorite trees). The verse conveys a sense of peace, contentment, and pleasure. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Nice poem for the contest. I love the picture that accompanies the poem. I also love the image of a weeping willow (one of my favorite trees). The verse conveys a sense of peace, contentment, and pleasure. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reviewing and your complimentary tone.
Comment from Ulla
It's a lovely three line poem and it could easily be a haiku, as well. A weeping willow is one of my favourite trees. Yes, it could easily whisper some secret in the breeze..good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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It's a lovely three line poem and it could easily be a haiku, as well. A weeping willow is one of my favourite trees. Yes, it could easily whisper some secret in the breeze..good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for such a nice review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ambient 3 line poem bringing to life the ever moving, sweeping willow as she drapes her skirt over your veranda and whispers sweet nothings, much enjoyed Crystie, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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An ambient 3 line poem bringing to life the ever moving, sweeping willow as she drapes her skirt over your veranda and whispers sweet nothings, much enjoyed Crystie, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your compliment-filled review.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from judiverse
That is a magnificent willow picture you've chosen. Interesting to have a willow that close to the house. It seems to speak to the inhabitants. Trees can become so familiar to us they have their place, almost like members of the family. Excellent presentation and best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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That is a magnificent willow picture you've chosen. Interesting to have a willow that close to the house. It seems to speak to the inhabitants. Trees can become so familiar to us they have their place, almost like members of the family. Excellent presentation and best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, CC. Great job with the syllable count
per line. Your art choice is supportive. I like the personification of
the willow tree.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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I enjoyed your contest entry, CC. Great job with the syllable count
per line. Your art choice is supportive. I like the personification of
the willow tree.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Marienkiefer
This is an enjoyable read.
Sparkling in this haiku 5-7-5: Weeping Willow, in full seasonal foliage, descriptive, clear images, subtle commentary on nature and human nature.
Is the word June a creative decision or strategic choice, I wonder?
Overall lovely poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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This is an enjoyable read.
Sparkling in this haiku 5-7-5: Weeping Willow, in full seasonal foliage, descriptive, clear images, subtle commentary on nature and human nature.
Is the word June a creative decision or strategic choice, I wonder?
Overall lovely poem.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for an insightful review. I picked "June" because it is one syllable shorter than 'summer' or 'autumn.'
Comment from tempeste
Ciao ,
I love weeping willows how their long graceful branches swish in the wind.
They have a gloomy vibe about them but I am addict to sadness.
I read your notes .. I like the idea that they whisper words but I'm incline to think sad ones rather than honeyed ones.
I still enjoyed your entry !
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Ciao ,
I love weeping willows how their long graceful branches swish in the wind.
They have a gloomy vibe about them but I am addict to sadness.
I read your notes .. I like the idea that they whisper words but I'm incline to think sad ones rather than honeyed ones.
I still enjoyed your entry !
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Bill Schott
This Haiku for Summer Day, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, finds the willow encroaching on the structures which require in visit and inspection during the day. Nice.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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This Haiku for Summer Day, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, finds the willow encroaching on the structures which require in visit and inspection during the day. Nice.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
