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Is it better to go out of your head than out of your mouth?
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Comment from
Someone Of Somewhere
A very fitting message for a one line poem contest! The slightly jarring brevity actually reinforced the point really well .
I think you've done a great job conveying yourself clearly without letting any unnecessary words escape onto the page :)
Good work and good luck for the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
Thank you so much for your rating and review!
Comment from
Fleedleflump
Yep - I've definitely been on both sides of that situation myself. The biggest challenge, I think, is knowing your audience. One person's joke is another's bullying. I've found in work situations, especially meetings, if I sit quietly and nod while people are speaking, they end up addressing me as though I know what they're talking about - which is sometimes true and other times not!
I enjoyed your piece.
Mike
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
I totally agree. Somethings are best left unsaid. Thank you so much for your rating and review!
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