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Writer's Block

A problem that I have sometime.

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Comment from RodG
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Thinking metaphorically is not easy. Poets have to practice seeing how things are related. I can truly understand the Speaker's despair when he can't conjure up one. I like the use of internal and end rhyme. Rod

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Rod. Rhyming is easy for me. I sometimes have trouble with the words in between.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, you cat would probably think of a few choice ones for you to choose from. I enjoyed your cute write Paul, you made me smile, a good one liner, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Christine. The cat's got my tongue, but I'm glad I made you smile.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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LOL so do I. I have my thesaurus right beside me. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I do understand the plight. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Barb. I use RhymeZone quite a bit.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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You have the summer to enjoy getting things done around the house. Cutting grass, washing windows. Cleaning out the garage. Those things are important to get done before another winter. As you work, you should come up with stories to write about. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Carolyn, Carolyn, Carolyn!!! You mean that I've got to do all those "unpleasant" things to come up with some ideas. I'm certainly not going to show this post to my wife.
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 13-Jul-2022
    Lol. I thought this would jolt your mind. Have a great day.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image, Paul.
-A good topic and well written poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good message about writing,
and how it can be difficult to come up with something.
-This one came out very well; good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Pam. Haven't had much luck in the contests, lately.
reply by Pam (respa) on 13-Jul-2022
    You are welcome, and you aren't alone in that category!