God's Whisper
Nature 3.5.310 total reviews
Comment from Michaela Moore
As a nature syllable contained poem, your diction is right on the money for me. Since I can remember, the wind has always embodied God to me, so I love your poem. It meant so much for me to read. Thank you! I needed this today.
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As a nature syllable contained poem, your diction is right on the money for me. Since I can remember, the wind has always embodied God to me, so I love your poem. It meant so much for me to read. Thank you! I needed this today.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I like this nature 3-5-3 poem. The syllable count is accurate. The font size is easy to read. The message is beautifully worded. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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I like this nature 3-5-3 poem. The syllable count is accurate. The font size is easy to read. The message is beautifully worded. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written Nature 3-5-3 poem you have penned for the contest. I love your words:
God whispers
as a breeze lightly
passes by
Beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very beautiful and very well written Nature 3-5-3 poem you have penned for the contest. I love your words:
God whispers
as a breeze lightly
passes by
Beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, God's Whisper, has the right setup and notes that even the early or late night is blessed by the presence of a loving God.
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This 3-5-3, God's Whisper, has the right setup and notes that even the early or late night is blessed by the presence of a loving God.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
Comment from kahpot
How very well written as we relate the breeze to God's voice, and realize that nature has His blessing, an excellent 3-5-3 poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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How very well written as we relate the breeze to God's voice, and realize that nature has His blessing, an excellent 3-5-3 poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You turn to nature for inspiration and your faith shows you the way here and I enjoyed your 3-5-3 as you created an ambient scene here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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You turn to nature for inspiration and your faith shows you the way here and I enjoyed your 3-5-3 as you created an ambient scene here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is beautiful. The artwork you added is lovely and I can almost feel the soft breeze as it whispers by. I truly enjoyed reading your writing and it should do well in the contest. I wish you the best in the voting.
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This is beautiful. The artwork you added is lovely and I can almost feel the soft breeze as it whispers by. I truly enjoyed reading your writing and it should do well in the contest. I wish you the best in the voting.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
Comment from jessizero
I like the thought of a lightly passing breeze being the whisper of God. It's a beautiful image. Thank you so much for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
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I like the thought of a lightly passing breeze being the whisper of God. It's a beautiful image. Thank you so much for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
Comment from RodG
I think you almost have a truly meaningful short poem. But I am confused by your second line. Does light pass by or does the breeze pass by lightly? May I suggest rephrasing your poem as follows:
God whispers
as a breeze lightly
passes by
Rod
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I think you almost have a truly meaningful short poem. But I am confused by your second line. Does light pass by or does the breeze pass by lightly? May I suggest rephrasing your poem as follows:
God whispers
as a breeze lightly
passes by
Rod
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good nature imagery with the breeze.
-A positive message in your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good nature imagery with the breeze.
-A positive message in your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
