My King is dead
There is one more Angel in Heaven27 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, sad, heartfelt, make a statement and are creative. I found these words to be very sad as I thought about how we never know when our lives will end. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is awesome and compliments these words. Thank you for
the author's notes.
Sending my condolences to you....With Sincere thoughts n Prayers, Maria
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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The author's words are clear, sad, heartfelt, make a statement and are creative. I found these words to be very sad as I thought about how we never know when our lives will end. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is awesome and compliments these words. Thank you for
the author's notes.
Sending my condolences to you....With Sincere thoughts n Prayers, Maria
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you Maria.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
My sincere condolences on the loss of your
beloved Dad, Ramona. I know you have many
awesome memories, though right now you are
very sad. Take time to grieve, but know he is
watching you and wants you to be happy.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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My sincere condolences on the loss of your
beloved Dad, Ramona. I know you have many
awesome memories, though right now you are
very sad. Take time to grieve, but know he is
watching you and wants you to be happy.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thanks Jan.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces the demise of one seen as a semblance of Elvis Presley.
The work highlights the demise of the protagonist's father, who happens to be a look alike of Elvis.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the specified entry requirements of the "one line poem contest.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the demise of one seen as a semblance of Elvis Presley.
The work highlights the demise of the protagonist's father, who happens to be a look alike of Elvis.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the specified entry requirements of the "one line poem contest.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
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Remain Blessed.
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You be blessed too.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I hate to hear you lost your dad. And it is great you felt he was a King. You were blessed to have him. He is with God. God needed another angel. There are no words that I can express to relieve your pain and heartbroken heart. The man in the picture has similar looks to Elvis. Especially his lips and eyes. They look as if they could be kin. Thank you for sharing. May he rest in peace.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I hate to hear you lost your dad. And it is great you felt he was a King. You were blessed to have him. He is with God. God needed another angel. There are no words that I can express to relieve your pain and heartbroken heart. The man in the picture has similar looks to Elvis. Especially his lips and eyes. They look as if they could be kin. Thank you for sharing. May he rest in peace.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you Carolyn.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Is there anything a person can say to lessen the pain when a beloved moves on? Maybe hoping, they have gone where age and illness has been removed and daily life holds no bar. Free at lay from "Human Bondage."
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Is there anything a person can say to lessen the pain when a beloved moves on? Maybe hoping, they have gone where age and illness has been removed and daily life holds no bar. Free at lay from "Human Bondage."
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thanks Tom.
Comment from Fleedleflump
My most heartfelt condolences. It's been a few years now since my Dad passed, and I think of him more fondly than ever. You do so much with so few words, using our knowledge of Elvis and his life to enrich your memory.
Beautiful.
Mike
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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My most heartfelt condolences. It's been a few years now since my Dad passed, and I think of him more fondly than ever. You do so much with so few words, using our knowledge of Elvis and his life to enrich your memory.
Beautiful.
Mike
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thanks Mike.
Comment from dragonpoet
Ramona,
This poem is quick and to the point. If that picture is ofyour dad, he really did look like Elvis Presley. Sorry for your loss.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Ramona,
This poem is quick and to the point. If that picture is ofyour dad, he really did look like Elvis Presley. Sorry for your loss.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much Joan. Yes. That?s my dad.
