Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Sanku
Since I was away I had missed two of your chapters.So i read all the three at a stretch. Pat and Luke collude to harm Ali and Roco reached at the right time. Two action oriented chapters were thrilling to read. Amy calling Ali is a sign that she is getting acceptance from the society....Very well done.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Since I was away I had missed two of your chapters.So i read all the three at a stretch. Pat and Luke collude to harm Ali and Roco reached at the right time. Two action oriented chapters were thrilling to read. Amy calling Ali is a sign that she is getting acceptance from the society....Very well done.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm happy to hear you caught up.
Comment from BethShelby
It sounds like Ali getting involved in seeing to it the women in this town aren't being being bullied, she had stirred up a lot of trouble with the bad guys.The little town that seemed peaceful had some stuff going on behind the scenes which Ali would like to make right and now Cord's family is in danger. The story is getting very interesting.
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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It sounds like Ali getting involved in seeing to it the women in this town aren't being being bullied, she had stirred up a lot of trouble with the bad guys.The little town that seemed peaceful had some stuff going on behind the scenes which Ali would like to make right and now Cord's family is in danger. The story is getting very interesting.
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this kind review. Things do get worse.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I am coming in cold to this so I can't review in context until I catch up. Overall, it seems like an interesting story, you have interesting and varied characters, and the tense situation is palpable. However, the conversation comes across as stilted. It reads as though it is set over a hundred years ago, which doesn't sit well with Ali being a high-powered corporate lawyer. kate xx
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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I am coming in cold to this so I can't review in context until I catch up. Overall, it seems like an interesting story, you have interesting and varied characters, and the tense situation is palpable. However, the conversation comes across as stilted. It reads as though it is set over a hundred years ago, which doesn't sit well with Ali being a high-powered corporate lawyer. kate xx
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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I will recheck the dialogue. I normally get praise for my dialogue, so I will see where I went wrong this time. Thank you for stopping by.
