Nature's Stage
Love Started On9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Nature's Stage, makes the most of the earth and sky as those colorful scenes are brought together here to represent the two huge hearts separated but meet on the horizon. Nice.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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This poem, Nature's Stage, makes the most of the earth and sky as those colorful scenes are brought together here to represent the two huge hearts separated but meet on the horizon. Nice.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Short and Colorful prompt contest.
Good poem color form, rhymes. connection between lines, presentation, and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Excellent entry for the Short and Colorful prompt contest.
Good poem color form, rhymes. connection between lines, presentation, and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you, it's wonderful to hear from you. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Lovely poem for the short and colorful prompt. I especially like the blue-green theme. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Lovely poem for the short and colorful prompt. I especially like the blue-green theme. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you, two of my favorite colors! :) Have a wonderful evening. :)
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have done a very good job with rhyme and meter. You have also managed to include a little romance in this short poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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You have done a very good job with rhyme and meter. You have also managed to include a little romance in this short poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Wow this is a really beautiful entry into the contest. So sweet and light and romantic and just a tad somber. Excellent presentation as well! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Wow this is a really beautiful entry into the contest. So sweet and light and romantic and just a tad somber. Excellent presentation as well! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful starry review. :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is an excellent entry for the contest. You have taken the writing prompt and created a lovely and well-written poem. The artwork is perfect too. I wish you tons of luck in the contest. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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This is an excellent entry for the contest. You have taken the writing prompt and created a lovely and well-written poem. The artwork is perfect too. I wish you tons of luck in the contest. Nicely done.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this excellent review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A very nice response to the prompt. Great use of color to express the growth in love with your beloved. I loved the last phrase: the last act will come back again...
Sweet blue-green memories. Good job.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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A very nice response to the prompt. Great use of color to express the growth in love with your beloved. I loved the last phrase: the last act will come back again...
Sweet blue-green memories. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from jessizero
I loved your reflections on blue and green memories. Your poem was both short and colorful, as the prompt stated. Great job! Thanks for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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I loved your reflections on blue and green memories. Your poem was both short and colorful, as the prompt stated. Great job! Thanks for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Thank you, I really appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Fleedleflump
Oh, the flow on this is gorgeous, a lilting, pulsing slice of beauty. There's so much hope in here, it's difficult to feel anything but happy. I really enjoyed reading this one :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Oh, the flow on this is gorgeous, a lilting, pulsing slice of beauty. There's so much hope in here, it's difficult to feel anything but happy. I really enjoyed reading this one :-)
Mike
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this encouraging review. It really means a lot to me. :)
