Harmony
the way things should be21 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This was so good I just had to come out of my cave of not reviewing to tell you so. Above all it is extremely thought-provoking. Will we really get an unlimited number of chances? Aaron certainly seems to be deserving of his beauty, and as all the others have been removed, perhaps so. However, I would have thought there has to come a time to call a halt. The dinosaurs have all gone. Why not us? "no-one is remotely indispensable" (BoJo). Kate xx
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keep themselves > keep to themselves
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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This was so good I just had to come out of my cave of not reviewing to tell you so. Above all it is extremely thought-provoking. Will we really get an unlimited number of chances? Aaron certainly seems to be deserving of his beauty, and as all the others have been removed, perhaps so. However, I would have thought there has to come a time to call a halt. The dinosaurs have all gone. Why not us? "no-one is remotely indispensable" (BoJo). Kate xx
Potential SPAGs for your consideration:
keep themselves > keep to themselves
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Many thanks, my friend, especially for the catch. G
