Bucolic Bliss
short and colorful poem11 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet!
The contest said SHORT and Colourful.
Besides you only one other contestant offered one stanza.
Some two and most offered scrolls.
I'm usually quite easy going when it comes to the requirements( often I forget one myself ) but this time I do think that being SHORT was imperative.
Being short and still offering something worthy (of my vote )was actually the Challenge here.
I will keep an eye out when this contest hits the booth and I will vote for your sweet poem.
I live in the countryside and I love nature. Lovely art choice too.
PS: I just voted for your poem you now have two votes!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Ciao mystery poet!
The contest said SHORT and Colourful.
Besides you only one other contestant offered one stanza.
Some two and most offered scrolls.
I'm usually quite easy going when it comes to the requirements( often I forget one myself ) but this time I do think that being SHORT was imperative.
Being short and still offering something worthy (of my vote )was actually the Challenge here.
I will keep an eye out when this contest hits the booth and I will vote for your sweet poem.
I live in the countryside and I love nature. Lovely art choice too.
PS: I just voted for your poem you now have two votes!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thanks for a great review and that vote!Much appreciated. zanya
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You are welcomed! ( smiles)
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I like this poem and the picture you took to go with it. Isn just a few words, you painted a lovely fall picture. You captured the change of season
well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I like this poem and the picture you took to go with it. Isn just a few words, you painted a lovely fall picture. You captured the change of season
well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Great review zanya
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
puts the poem all together! I enjoyed the read of this poem. as it
describes the scene with colors and a change in season. The artwork
compliments both the theme and words of this poem well.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
puts the poem all together! I enjoyed the read of this poem. as it
describes the scene with colors and a change in season. The artwork
compliments both the theme and words of this poem well.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thanks for a great reveiw zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You included some beautiful contrasting colours here in your write and created some lovely imagery in nature and your words stand alone without the need for a picture, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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You included some beautiful contrasting colours here in your write and created some lovely imagery in nature and your words stand alone without the need for a picture, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Could be the Haiku queens are at it again. Even I, who despises short writing take note of good works when they are penned, and this qualifies for me even if it is a haiku
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Could be the Haiku queens are at it again. Even I, who despises short writing take note of good works when they are penned, and this qualifies for me even if it is a haiku
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful image and presentation. They suggest peace and serenity. Your words compliment the image well, and the colours you chose to write about are two of my favourites. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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A beautiful image and presentation. They suggest peace and serenity. Your words compliment the image well, and the colours you chose to write about are two of my favourites. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I like to ride in the car and look at fields of corn. Usually the deer are in those fields. They are beautiful animals. You can make many things with corn. I love the smell of sweetness once they are ready to harvest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I like to ride in the car and look at fields of corn. Usually the deer are in those fields. They are beautiful animals. You can make many things with corn. I love the smell of sweetness once they are ready to harvest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thanks for a great reveiw zanya
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your picture plus words pairs perfectly, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed your colorful contest entry. Your poem, though
short, creates great imagery. I know you didn't list this as
a 575. However, it is a 576.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Your picture plus words pairs perfectly, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed your colorful contest entry. Your poem, though
short, creates great imagery. I know you didn't list this as
a 575. However, it is a 576.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thanks for a great review & reminder of syllable overflow! zanya
Comment from jessizero
Your "short and colorful" poem was definitely both short and colorful. You expressed everything in few words, and your colors were vivid. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Your "short and colorful" poem was definitely both short and colorful. You expressed everything in few words, and your colors were vivid. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Sally Law
Is there anything more beautiful than an open field in the sun? Loving this, mystery poet, and your colorful illustration. Marvelous offering in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Is there anything more beautiful than an open field in the sun? Loving this, mystery poet, and your colorful illustration. Marvelous offering in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Great reveiw zanya
