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A sonnet

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Melissa,
This is a well done sonnet. It could be considered a love poem for the art of writing in any way. This site is meant as a way to learn or maybe help others learn the craft of writing poetry or prose.
Keep writing and stay healty
Joan

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
    Thank you sweet Joan. I always enjoy looking through the portfolios of others and I usually get inspired. Hugs!!

    Melissa
reply by dragonpoet on 08-Sep-2022
    You're welcome, Melissa. That often happens.
    Joan
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
    Thank you sweet Joan. I always enjoy looking through the portfolios of others and I usually get inspired. Hugs!!

    Melissa
Comment from kahpot
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What a wonderful idea you have written here, a lot of inspiration comes from reading works of others, an excellent sonnet and so very helpful, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
    Thanks so much Kim!! I hope this type of poem is helpful. :)

    Melissa
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are engaging, interesting, inspiring, clear, descriptive
and creative. Thank you for the author's notes - the notes are detailed,
educating, and interesting. I liked the author's inspiring words and hope
to do this one day. The artwork goes well with these motivating words!

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
    Hi Maria. Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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A nice tribute to the variety of writers on FanStory. I great idea to allow the portfolios to be used as guides and examples. I will follow your lead on this one.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
    Hi Tim. Thanks so much.

    Melissa
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Melissa,
Your presentation is informative and very valuable.most members, especially the new ones, can greatly benefit from your work.

Nice work.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
    Hi Cindy. Thanks so much!!

    Melissa
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 12-Jul-2022
    You?re welcome
Comment from Paul McFarland
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Very nice sonnet, Melissa, and a great idea to get others to do a little searching for poems that they might be interested in. I do this from time to time.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
    Thank you Paul for the lovely review.

    Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
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This is a great suggestion! I actually explore like that now and then - just to see how others tackle difficult formats. That's how we learn and get inspired. Fantastic idea for newbies!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
    Thanks so much June. I hope it will help others to find solutions and inspiration. I go through other writer's work too.

    Melissa
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Thank you for doing this, Melissa. I remember when I first joined FanStory, I was so grateful for posts like this. I remember going through certain writers' portfolios looking for examples of haikus. I'm still looking for the secret to haikus, but the other writer's posts were very helpful.
FanStory has many purposes. One of them is to promote writing by helping other writers. That is what you just did.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
    Hello and good morning Debbie. I am glad you liked this educational piece. I have been 'stomping around' in other poets' work and thought that others might not know that it is possible. Hence, this verse. Hope it helps other writers :). Hugs and I hope you have a lovely day!!

    Melissa
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your sonnet is well done, Melissa. Its lines read well and adhere
to the style. Great job on that part. Your notes are written in a way
others can easily find what they may be looking for. As a side note,
individual portfolios are very difficult for the owner to try to go back
and make books and/or find anything. That alone takes days.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
    Good morning Jan. So glad you liked this educational poem. I don't usually go in this direction with a theme, but thought that some others might not know how to go about it. When I invited a few people to look at the Forum Debate recently, several didn't even know there was a Forum... so, I thought this might help them look around a bit. I know I like to look at other writer's work. I have not tried to organize my poems, its too daunting! Hugs!

    Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh, I'm glad you wrote this. I think it should be added to Gloria's book for Newbies. I thought of writing some clues about how to review because newbies tend to rate low because of the Fanstory instructions.
So glad you mentioned how to do this! And I'm glad you mentioned Gloria's works, too!!

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
    Thanks Helen. I love Gloria's work and the poem I referenced made a big change in my own writing... it introduced me to a new meter. I hope it will help some folks to navigate the site a little better. I know what you mean about the low ratings. I always check to see if they are new and they usually are... most of the time. I just grit my teeth and keep on writing LOL. Thanks again, sweet lady.

    Melissa
reply by lyenochka on 07-Jul-2022
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