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Bold Beauty

5-7-5 poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 3 Line Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
    Sorry it took so long to reply. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Michele Harber
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What an unusual subject for a 3-line 5-7-5 poem. However, you make it work by saying so much in what isn't actually said. We know that the woman is strong and tough and that, while she may smile on the outside, and while it might even be genuine, you don't want to cross her. We also know that she's worked her way up through the ranks - and all this from just 10 words and 17 syllables. That's impressive.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
    Sorry it took so long to reply. Thank you for the review.
reply by Michele Harber on 01-Dec-2022
    No problem, and you're very welcome.