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Potato Chips

Acrostic

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Comment from Lilly Flowers
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Haha - I thoroughly enjoyed reading this cute poem. It was put together so nicely and put a smile on my face. Call me weird, but I can eat just one potato chip. Regards, Lilly

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
    You can? Ok, you're weird,lol! No, joking aside, I used to not get people's infatuation with chips, but I grew to love them with certain foods. Thank you for your nice comments!
    Tina
Comment from mermaids
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Those yummy potato chips are not really good for anyone but they are irresistible. Excellent acrostic form that captures the essence of one of our favorite snacks.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
    Amen! Irresistible! Thanks for this review and a definite truth!
    Tina
Comment from June Sargent
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Yeah, that's my downfall as well. I can't just eat one. Never could. And the evidence of my weakness does go immediately from the lips to the hips. Maybe we can be forgiven during the summer months when we have family barbecues...I'll diet later.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
    There ya go. I will diet later too! Chips are necessary for summer foods!
    Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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For me, it's stomach--EVERYTHING has ended up there for about ten years now. I used to be small-waisted and flat-stomached. You're right about the chips. Lays was right in their commercials: "Nobody can eat just one"!
Your acrostic poem is clever and realistic!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
    Me too ..the stomach, after I went through menopause...my body seemed like it wasn't mine anymore,lol! I just started to eat better and the thing that made my stomach go down...was not eating after dinner. Finally, something worked! Still have pounds to go though!
    Thanks for reviewing and sharing your own experience.
    Hugs,
    Tina
Comment from Sally Law
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This is so darling. I just ate Cape Cod light chips with my lunch. I wonder if there really is such a thing? Lite chips, an oxymoron. ;)) ;))

Sending you my best from the chip fellowship and my best for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
    I just had low salt chips from Walmart with my lunch. Haha, lite chips IS an oxymoron! Maybe that's why they spelled light wrong, haha!😁
    I got lucky and won 2nd place with this.
    From the chip fellowship,
    Tina
reply by Sally Law on 11-Jul-2022
    Congratulations on your win. I've been busy writing and getting my 5th book to the publisher. I've been sick a lot which is not helping. A better day today. XOs
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
    Sorry you're sick but yay for the new book! I will pray now that the Lord sustains you and you feel the energy and brainpower to get that book to the publisher. Congrats in advance! I have faith!
    Hugs always,
    Tina
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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Awesome self improvement poem. Potato chips that's a tough one. Bet you can't eat just one so true. Great flow and rhyme. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Joanne!
reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 10-Jul-2022
    Your welcome
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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This is a fun acrostic! Potato chips are very hard to resist and I have taken them off of my food choice list. I don't call it a diet but I eat healthy foods now and hope to lose weight.
Good luck with the contest!
Have an amazing day!
Jesse

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Jesse. I'm trying to reduce them for sure! Good luck with your weight loss. I'm doing that myself:)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Jesse. I'm trying to reduce them for sure! Good luck with your weight loss. I'm doing that myself:)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Jesse. I'm trying to reduce them for sure! Good luck with your weight loss. I'm doing that myself:)
Comment from jessizero
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Your poem was fun and factual. It rhymed, and it was about self-improvement. It also made me want potato chips! Good luck with your cravings. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thanks so much!! I put my chips in a small bowl so I don't overeat,lol!
    Have a great evening!
    Tina
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job, Tina, with your rhyming acrostic poem.
I enjoyed reading it. The story told is true and could apply
to other tasty treats. I have seen chips, too, in flavors that
seem unreal, but the real thing is always the best.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thanks for reading. You are correct, many tasty treats go straight to the hips.
    Moderation is a word I am learning to act out,lol!
    Tina
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Author,
I like the sound of your rhymes.
This is a great self-improvement poem.
Good luck with this and all your writing.
I'm going to buy a bag of chips today. Lol
Have a great weekend,
Cindy

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thanks a munch!
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 10-Jul-2022
    😊