Education
Healthy and fun for all5 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
What a wonderfully inspiring little piece. I totally agree - learning new things is exciting (although I didn't realise that when I was in full time education, of course!) and gives us reasons to continue striving in life.
Mike
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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What a wonderfully inspiring little piece. I totally agree - learning new things is exciting (although I didn't realise that when I was in full time education, of course!) and gives us reasons to continue striving in life.
Mike
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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A teacher? I admire those who work in the educational field...it's not easy. Thank you for this nice review.:)
Comment from RodG
Indeed, education--whether formal or through one's own efforts--will improve anyone. This acrostic should appeal to young readers because of your use of alternating rhyme. Rod
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Indeed, education--whether formal or through one's own efforts--will improve anyone. This acrostic should appeal to young readers because of your use of alternating rhyme. Rod
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review, I hope it encourages everyone to learn new things.:)
Comment from WriterHeather
Ooooh! I love this. Education is one of the greatest ways in which one can improve themselves. I love learning new things and reading. Well done!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Ooooh! I love this. Education is one of the greatest ways in which one can improve themselves. I love learning new things and reading. Well done!!!!!!!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thank you, I really do believe in the power of learning to keep the brain sharp. :)
Comment from Alyssa Wilson
Acrostic poems are so difficult! I love your imagery for this piece. It is very fun and engaging. I did find that for me, this poem doesn't flow incredibly well and it is apparent that the letters are dictating your lines. I think at C is where it becomes a bit rough, then at O it comes together a bit again. Education is always a worthy topic, and I like that you chose it for this prompt!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Acrostic poems are so difficult! I love your imagery for this piece. It is very fun and engaging. I did find that for me, this poem doesn't flow incredibly well and it is apparent that the letters are dictating your lines. I think at C is where it becomes a bit rough, then at O it comes together a bit again. Education is always a worthy topic, and I like that you chose it for this prompt!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your uplifting rhyming acrostic poem certainly fulfills the prompt on self-improvement. Relevant knowledge may be gathered from so many sources. It is especially important for the aging to keep their minds active.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Your uplifting rhyming acrostic poem certainly fulfills the prompt on self-improvement. Relevant knowledge may be gathered from so many sources. It is especially important for the aging to keep their minds active.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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I agree, thanks for this terrific review. :)
