Radiant Beauty
Collector's dream of blossoming beauties3 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hello Michael, This is such a
beauteous haiku. It's very
imaginative too. I wish I had
a green thumb. I kept telling
people not to buy me any
houseplants, lol! May you
have a happy Monday &
blessings. :)
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Hello Michael, This is such a
beauteous haiku. It's very
imaginative too. I wish I had
a green thumb. I kept telling
people not to buy me any
houseplants, lol! May you
have a happy Monday &
blessings. :)
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Radiant Beauty...I love these immensely different flowers. You can grow one easily. Start with the most common ones, phalaenopsis. Enjoy it as it blooms. I have mine all outside, but they do well inside by a window. Growing orchids is my retirement hobby. I receive my poetic inspiration from them. Thank you very much for the six stars.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love the radiant descriptive lines, especially the use of symmetrically on its own line, dominating its syllable count. And then the dual direction of feasting - we feast on the view, the flower feasts on the sunshine. This is lovely.
Mike
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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I love the radiant descriptive lines, especially the use of symmetrically on its own line, dominating its syllable count. And then the dual direction of feasting - we feast on the view, the flower feasts on the sunshine. This is lovely.
Mike
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Your review of feelings generated by orchids is so heartwarming. Every bloom has a majestic presence, and every year one expects the bloom to outshine the previous year. Thanks
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces eyes feasting on a flower from an orchid plant.
The work highlights the structural setting of this particular orchid flower; its lip shaped splendor that makes it adorable for the eyes to feast upon.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of imagery, metaphor, and alliteration.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces eyes feasting on a flower from an orchid plant.
The work highlights the structural setting of this particular orchid flower; its lip shaped splendor that makes it adorable for the eyes to feast upon.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of imagery, metaphor, and alliteration.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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My objective is to learn the real art of Haiku poetry. Thank you for your acknowledgement. From your lavishing comments, I gather you know the beauty emanating from such plants. Eventually, when I learn how to transfer photos to this web site. I would like to transfer my orchid pictures, which I take daily, to preserve permanently their beauty along with my poems. Thanks again for your gracious comments.
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Remain Blessed.
