Beauty Defined
Some of God's creations.50 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
The artistry of the presentation made me pause and admire it. Your word choices have a beauty all their own, as you list many of the most beautiful sights and sounds God made. The imagery is like a beautiful movie. Your last line was perfect, as it made me think of night sounds that one may not hear, but they still occur and are a tribute to a good and creative God!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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The artistry of the presentation made me pause and admire it. Your word choices have a beauty all their own, as you list many of the most beautiful sights and sounds God made. The imagery is like a beautiful movie. Your last line was perfect, as it made me think of night sounds that one may not hear, but they still occur and are a tribute to a good and creative God!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Your great review and stars are greatly appreciated.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Raul1
This is wonderful and beautiful poetry. I have enjoyed reading it. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! Very good job! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing!
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This is wonderful and beautiful poetry. I have enjoyed reading it. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! Very good job! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are nature based, beautiful, interesting descriptive,
and creative. Thank you so much for the author's notes - I loved the
statement you made about God's work. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is stunning and compliments these words.
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The author's words are nature based, beautiful, interesting descriptive,
and creative. Thank you so much for the author's notes - I loved the
statement you made about God's work. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is stunning and compliments these words.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
Comment from nomi338
I do believe that another work of God that is a wonder to behold, is the gift of writing that he bestowed upon one Mr. W. Smith. Your poem is sublime with beautiful words and phrases strung together to create a true work of art.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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I do believe that another work of God that is a wonder to behold, is the gift of writing that he bestowed upon one Mr. W. Smith. Your poem is sublime with beautiful words and phrases strung together to create a true work of art.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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My friend, you honor me with your extremely nice review and gold
stars. I am humbled, thank you.
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The praise is well deserved my friend.
Comment from Sally Law
Since I am blind, sounds and scents are my world. My doctor says this is normal for blind folks because the others senses step forward to help. A beautiful poem for my senses and spirit. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Since I am blind, sounds and scents are my world. My doctor says this is normal for blind folks because the others senses step forward to help. A beautiful poem for my senses and spirit. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Good to hear from you Sally. your review and stars are beautiful.
Comment from Dylan 22
Wow! This is some incredible imagery. A truly excellent poem. In particular the line "the sun falling gracefully into the sea" stood out to me. I could see that, and everything else you described so clearly while reading this. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Wow! This is some incredible imagery. A truly excellent poem. In particular the line "the sun falling gracefully into the sea" stood out to me. I could see that, and everything else you described so clearly while reading this. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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My friend, I am humbled by your kind words and gold star. You honor me.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your presentation on this
beautiful poem, Willie. I enjoyed reading it. The rhymes
work, the flow is smooth, the words create great imagery,
ad the picture is beautiful.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did a great job with your presentation on this
beautiful poem, Willie. I enjoyed reading it. The rhymes
work, the flow is smooth, the words create great imagery,
ad the picture is beautiful.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Willie,
You have a very nice presentation here and definitely beauty abound within your view of your surrounds and thoughts.
There are some verse that allows the mind to visualise the imagery painted in a simple, but effective way.
It was a pleasure to read this poem Willie... any positive, any beauty to uplift a soul is worth the admittance.
With our thoughts we create...
a bond to nature.
Kind regards,
James.
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Hi Willie,
You have a very nice presentation here and definitely beauty abound within your view of your surrounds and thoughts.
There are some verse that allows the mind to visualise the imagery painted in a simple, but effective way.
It was a pleasure to read this poem Willie... any positive, any beauty to uplift a soul is worth the admittance.
With our thoughts we create...
a bond to nature.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, God has gifted these wonders to His great love for us, nothing can stop the love of God being poured out, and the greatest hift of all, the gift of salvation through the death and resurrection of His beloved Son, Jesus, well done, blessings Roy
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Oh yes, God has gifted these wonders to His great love for us, nothing can stop the love of God being poured out, and the greatest hift of all, the gift of salvation through the death and resurrection of His beloved Son, Jesus, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
Comment from BethShelby
You write beautiful poetry and you love all the beauty of nature. Everything you've mention in this poem is about nature. Thank you for sharing i with us. I enjoyed reading it.
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You write beautiful poetry and you love all the beauty of nature. Everything you've mention in this poem is about nature. Thank you for sharing i with us. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
