Beauty Defined
Some of God's creations.50 total reviews
Comment from Frank Malley
"Beauty Defined" is an excellent poem, listing in rhymed tetrameter couplets the genuinely endlessly and actually awesome beauties of nature. In whatever terms one conceives the world he or she cannot fail to feel the glory in simply perceiving and being part of all-present Nature.
"Beauty Defined" is an excellent poem, listing in rhymed tetrameter couplets the genuinely endlessly and actually awesome beauties of nature. In whatever terms one conceives the world he or she cannot fail to feel the glory in simply perceiving and being part of all-present Nature.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
Comment from Kevin McNeany
What beautiful sounds and sight,
Whether awake in the day, or asleep at night...virtual six this is pretty incredible, sights, sounds and natures beauty all captured here in such a well written and constructed poem. Loved reading this well done kindest regards Kevin.
What beautiful sounds and sight,
Whether awake in the day, or asleep at night...virtual six this is pretty incredible, sights, sounds and natures beauty all captured here in such a well written and constructed poem. Loved reading this well done kindest regards Kevin.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Willie,
This exceptional poem has great sound, imagery, and rhythm.
Your photo adds to the poem's beauty.
I like your unique take on some elements of nature.
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy
Willie,
This exceptional poem has great sound, imagery, and rhythm.
Your photo adds to the poem's beauty.
I like your unique take on some elements of nature.
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-Your note and poem are appreciated.
-I like the style of your poem with rhyming couplets.
-Effective imagery of many beautiful things in nature.
-A few of them that I like are
"Dew from a flower, ready to drop."
"The difference of each snowflake as they fall."
-A good concluding couplet.
-I enjoyed your poem; a good one for the Fourth of July.
-Have a great day!!
-Nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-Your note and poem are appreciated.
-I like the style of your poem with rhyming couplets.
-Effective imagery of many beautiful things in nature.
-A few of them that I like are
"Dew from a flower, ready to drop."
"The difference of each snowflake as they fall."
-A good concluding couplet.
-I enjoyed your poem; a good one for the Fourth of July.
-Have a great day!!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Isn't it wonderful that you recognize the beauty abounding around us of which most will not see plainly? Every description here in are taken for granted even from the earliest age. Well done.
Isn't it wonderful that you recognize the beauty abounding around us of which most will not see plainly? Every description here in are taken for granted even from the earliest age. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a lovely journey through the sensations and elements of nature and life that we can enjoy and appreciate for as long as there is breath in our bodies. I loved some of you descriptions - especially the sun dropping into the ocean. Beautifully written.
Mike
This is a lovely journey through the sensations and elements of nature and life that we can enjoy and appreciate for as long as there is breath in our bodies. I loved some of you descriptions - especially the sun dropping into the ocean. Beautifully written.
Mike
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have done a great job of describing God's gifts to us, the beauty of nature. It's such a shame that we don't look after them properly. Keep writing, Kate xx
You have done a great job of describing God's gifts to us, the beauty of nature. It's such a shame that we don't look after them properly. Keep writing, Kate xx
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Appreciating nature with all its ups and downs is a fine way to enjoy the free things in life and your magical reminder here is a joy to read Willie, the sights and sounds of the outdoors are joyous, a tranquil and ambient write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
Appreciating nature with all its ups and downs is a fine way to enjoy the free things in life and your magical reminder here is a joy to read Willie, the sights and sounds of the outdoors are joyous, a tranquil and ambient write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Dolly, glad you liked the poem.
Comment from Whitewave
Willie,
You are so right - no end to the beauty of God's work - and no end to the works of God's beauty. You have captured it all in the myriad of magical moments - sights, sounds, aromas -expressed so cleverly in the words of your poem. Only someone who is truly bathed in the nurture of nature would be witness to such delicate delights.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
Willie,
You are so right - no end to the beauty of God's work - and no end to the works of God's beauty. You have captured it all in the myriad of magical moments - sights, sounds, aromas -expressed so cleverly in the words of your poem. Only someone who is truly bathed in the nurture of nature would be witness to such delicate delights.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you, for your very kind words and the gold star. They are very
much appreciated.
Comment from karenina
So true! Everything my on your list is bathed in natural beauty and there, from God, for each of us to enjoy!
What a shame when we allow ourselves to get distracted!
Karenina
So true! Everything my on your list is bathed in natural beauty and there, from God, for each of us to enjoy!
What a shame when we allow ourselves to get distracted!
Karenina
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022