Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sweet story of history repeating itself within the genes of our children and memories of yesterdays ancestors are brought to mind, I enjoyed your entertaining story Rod, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022

Hi, Dolly. I am delighted you enjoyed meeting the Stellas. Rod

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Stella -etoile a sea of joy and peace. I like your heart warming story, the kid has a good imagination. thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022

Hi, Iza. I am blessed to have such a witty, imaginative granddaughter. Many thanks for sharing our story. Rod

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Enjoyed your story! Just by looking over a photo album and imagining people who aren't even pictured can lead to some wonderful times of closeness. Best wishes in the contest!
Suggestion:
And I bet she made him feel laugh." (remove "feel")

Question:
"What else can you tell me about her?" I asked.
I wondered if this was "I" as in the grandfather-narrator or Stella asking because the answer seemed to be from the grandfather.

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 Comment Written 02-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022

Lyenochka, I am delighted you enjoyed meeting the Stellas. Many thanks, too, for catching that error which I fixed. Rod