My Husband
He is my best friend.6 total reviews
Comment from Quoiky
This was a cute, quick read. Your love for your husband shows in your writing. He sounds like a really sweet guy... a keeper.
The only criticism I could find is when you quote Dr Seuss...you left out 'one'... in you may be ONE person.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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This was a cute, quick read. Your love for your husband shows in your writing. He sounds like a really sweet guy... a keeper.
The only criticism I could find is when you quote Dr Seuss...you left out 'one'... in you may be ONE person.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you have 4 votes now.
You were the perfect match. A heavenly match.
You both shared the same love for God and his teachings . That is alway a great foundation on which to build one relationship.
A generous, caring , loving husband, friend , neighbour .
I wish you still many years embraced in his warm arms.
Ciao!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Ciao poet, you have 4 votes now.
You were the perfect match. A heavenly match.
You both shared the same love for God and his teachings . That is alway a great foundation on which to build one relationship.
A generous, caring , loving husband, friend , neighbour .
I wish you still many years embraced in his warm arms.
Ciao!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
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I appreciate you reading all poems and your reviews.
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Thank you , I?m glad you appreciate my thoughts and comments.
Keep safe !
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Please read my current poems.
Comment from C2
I'm not sure how to judge the writing here; it feels loose and a little rambling. Having said that, it could be a specific choice to use a stream-of-consciouness style. Either way, it works. The love you have for your husband come across beautiffully and without reservation. Any man would love to hear words like this from his wife. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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I'm not sure how to judge the writing here; it feels loose and a little rambling. Having said that, it could be a specific choice to use a stream-of-consciouness style. Either way, it works. The love you have for your husband come across beautiffully and without reservation. Any man would love to hear words like this from his wife. Congratulations!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I understand and am glad to be sealed eternally to the woman I love for going to heaven and being without her would diminishd what heaven should feel like.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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I understand and am glad to be sealed eternally to the woman I love for going to heaven and being without her would diminishd what heaven should feel like.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
Congratulations for succinctly adumbrating the great feelings you have about your husband. Your work took a pen portrait dimension and is written in an exceptional way; with anecdotes that are equally reminiscent of an exceptional man. Congratulations for sharing a work that falls in tandem with the specified entry requirements of the writing prompt.
Exceptional work. Keep the flag flying.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Congratulations for succinctly adumbrating the great feelings you have about your husband. Your work took a pen portrait dimension and is written in an exceptional way; with anecdotes that are equally reminiscent of an exceptional man. Congratulations for sharing a work that falls in tandem with the specified entry requirements of the writing prompt.
Exceptional work. Keep the flag flying.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thenks!
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Hope you read the poem about Bella! I really appreciate the six stars!
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Remain Blessed.
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Will you please read my poem about Bella? It would mean a lot to me.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love the straightforward, gentle way you've written this. There's no doubt about the depth of your love and devotion, and he sounds like a lovely man. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Spag notes:
'When, we met, it was love at first sight.' - the first comma should be removed.
'To the world, you may be one one person' - doubled up on 'one's
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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I love the straightforward, gentle way you've written this. There's no doubt about the depth of your love and devotion, and he sounds like a lovely man. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Spag notes:
'When, we met, it was love at first sight.' - the first comma should be removed.
'To the world, you may be one one person' - doubled up on 'one's
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thanks!
