Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

One of my favorite verses: "A Word's search where a hold be beautiful." You have some strong metaphors in this poem. I especially like thois one that will draw the reader in to pause and reflect: "As those reliable dibs on the past. I also got a 3 from 'wordfinder' who has written NOTHING. He's got an anger issue and several of us are his dart board. This is a lovely tribute to your father.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022

Thanks Liz O'Neill~ a reliable dib on most of my writs... like with an honest recognition... one here from a great review.

Johnny

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022

correction;
~ those reliable dibs on most of my writs...

reply by Liz O'Neill on 29-Jun-2022

***warm smile***

Comment from Wordfinder

Needs Improvement

I found this confusing and have read and reread it trying to understand what your poem is about. I sense this is a very personal piece and as such, perhaps only understandable to you, your family and friends.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022

There are those of us who would consider this poem as exceptional

reply by Wordfinder on 29-Jun-2022

Yes, as I said - you, your family and friends

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022

I do not find your comment to be an authoritative and befitting critique

Comment from Christine Geyer

Needs Improvement

I am sorry to say that I have absolutely no idea what this poem is about or what the author is attempting to express. It was not difficult to read but I felt it had no purpose to glean from it

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022

There are those of us who would consider this poem as exceptional