Squirrel in the Tree Tops
Squirrels can be pests in Fall.13 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
I enjoyed reading your squirrel poem. I am a fan of these creatures, I know they are pests at times. You have a light feel and flow to your words that takes the reader out into nature.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I enjoyed reading your squirrel poem. I am a fan of these creatures, I know they are pests at times. You have a light feel and flow to your words that takes the reader out into nature.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you, mermaids. I am delighted my poem can put you there among the squirrels foraging amidst the treetops.
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely story within this poem! It was written so well and flowed so smoothly that I was almost present at the scene. The image is beautiful and the presentation excellent. Best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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A lovely story within this poem! It was written so well and flowed so smoothly that I was almost present at the scene. The image is beautiful and the presentation excellent. Best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I am so pleased I could put you at this scene, Wendy. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Squirrels can be real pests. Your words give them legitimacy though. It is fun to watch them prance around in the treetops, just not in my bird feeder.
Very nice.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Squirrels can be real pests. Your words give them legitimacy though. It is fun to watch them prance around in the treetops, just not in my bird feeder.
Very nice.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I, too, love to watch squirrels when they?re not being pesky. Thank you, Gary, for sharing my poem.
Comment from June Sargent
I can imagine a driveway full of fallen leaves, twigs and acorns can be annoying. And it doesn't take more than one squirrel to accomplish this! Your free verse flows naturally and paints a full picture with ease. And I love the artwork. Well done for the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I can imagine a driveway full of fallen leaves, twigs and acorns can be annoying. And it doesn't take more than one squirrel to accomplish this! Your free verse flows naturally and paints a full picture with ease. And I love the artwork. Well done for the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I am so pleased you enjoyed your scenario amidst the treetops, June. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Yes, I see your squirrel! Your poem describes him so well The verbs show good action. I just hope he stays in the tree and away from my bird feeder, where he is not welcome! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Yes, I see your squirrel! Your poem describes him so well The verbs show good action. I just hope he stays in the tree and away from my bird feeder, where he is not welcome! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Hi, Verna. Many thanks for reviewing my poem. I am always amazed how much these fellas consume. They will pillage my oak tree and storm my feeder.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I love the picture, it is so lovely. And the story you tell in a poem is great. I do relate to this story. Those squirrels know how to make a mess in our driveways. And if you are not careful, an acorn can get hit you. Thank you for sharing your story. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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I love the picture, it is so lovely. And the story you tell in a poem is great. I do relate to this story. Those squirrels know how to make a mess in our driveways. And if you are not careful, an acorn can get hit you. Thank you for sharing your story. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Indeed I was lucky to find this picture. Many thanks, Carolyn, for sharing my poem.
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You are welcome.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, nature based, descriptive, clear and
creative. Thank you for the author's notes - an education on the squirrel and acorns! The poem flows and connects well. It was suspenseful to read. The artwork compliments the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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The author's words are interesting, nature based, descriptive, clear and
creative. Thank you for the author's notes - an education on the squirrel and acorns! The poem flows and connects well. It was suspenseful to read. The artwork compliments the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Many thanks, harmony, for your high praise of my poem.
Comment from royowen
I can understand how you feel, it must amazing to have a land full of them, my land doesn't have any of these "scamps" but I've seen rhe red squirrels in England and they grey one ones in the US, beautifully written my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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I can understand how you feel, it must amazing to have a land full of them, my land doesn't have any of these "scamps" but I've seen rhe red squirrels in England and they grey one ones in the US, beautifully written my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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I know I would miss these pests if they weren?t around. Many thanks for your kind praise, Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sally Law
I adore all free forms of poetry. You have done a marvelous job with this offering. The theme is fun and beautifully presented. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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I adore all free forms of poetry. You have done a marvelous job with this offering. The theme is fun and beautifully presented. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Hi, Sally. I appreciate your kind praise of my free verse poem and your best wishes.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love watching the squirrels in our garden. There's one very bold one who waits when we go outside until we're within a couple of feet before barrelling away up the side of the house, chattering at as as though to say 'get out of my garden, humans!'
I very much enjoyed your poem :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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I love watching the squirrels in our garden. There's one very bold one who waits when we go outside until we're within a couple of feet before barrelling away up the side of the house, chattering at as as though to say 'get out of my garden, humans!'
I very much enjoyed your poem :-)
Mike
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Squirrels can be a lot of fun to watch, but they are often a nuisance around my feeder. Many thanks for sharing my poem.
