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Im Fat

A cinquain contest entry

2 total reviews 
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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I am phat - telepat:) I love your poem is funny and interesting: '
I'm Fat.
No, not like that.
I am not large at all.
I am skinny and very tall.
I'm PHAT!!!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    Thanks I added an illustration if interested
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Obviously, this is a good Cinquain poetry contest entry has good sense of humour, a sort of comedy, something ironic and jugglery of words, fat is phat, truly you talk about your physical state and status, you are skinny and tall, not fat in real sense; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    Thanks