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Be Your Best

A Site Contest Entry

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Comment from Gloria ....
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Very good, kahpot. And if we are lucky we too won't remember what we haven't achieved.

I think the simplicity of your presentation and six words make this a memorable six liner.

Wishing you the best of luck with the Contest Committee. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

Comment from lyenochka
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That's a good way to press the reader on to keep trying to achieve. But actually, we will remember our own and our children's achievements more than others will. In fact, when in comes to politicians, every one of them have very short memories about what they have or haven't achieved. Lol.
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
    "remember our own and our children's achievements more than others will." exactly what I was trying to say "no buts" we will remember what they achieve that's why I did use the words (haven't achieved), as always very much appreciated
Comment from June Sargent
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Got that right! Sometimes they don't even remember what we have achieved, but we still need to try. Otherwise, we will end up with a lot of regrets and what ifs. Life is not about our failures, but about our efforts. So, get back on that horse...

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

Comment from John Ciarmello
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I enjoyed this, Kahpot. It is one of those head-tilting one-liners. I love the short saying that makes you think and how true this is. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022