Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine tribute to this special lady in your life and I enjoyed the joy and laughter you included in your words here, a fine love poem from the heart Barry, much enjoyed,l love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022

Dolly,
Thanks so much for your kind words. Yes a lot of heart into this one.
Please take care. Have a good day.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I can see that your true love is Kate. Good for you. It is great that you have someone in your life. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022

Raul,
Thanks for your kind words. Yes a lot of love into this one. You have a great day.Take Care
Barry Penfold.

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

I love the way the poem moves along with a melody
of grace and devotion. My
very best wishes for the love poem contest. This poem is
a good contender. Have a
wondrous day. All the best. ~

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022

Regina, Thanks for the kind review. Hope you are ok and enjoying life as much as possible. You too have a wondrous day.
Barry Penfold

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

I like the structure of this, with the shorter lines of the central stanza causing an increase in pace, reflecting the excitement caused by the description of Kate. I also love that your greatest wish is for shared joy and laughter - who could disagree with that :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022

Mike,
Thanks for the review and who could disagree with a union of laughter and joy. Certainly not me. You have a good day.Thanks again.

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Barry, a sweet and heartfelt love poem. I especially liked:

Through the days and years to come
May my good fortune be that she stands beside my gate
(Very good imagery)

As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. "Free verse is free-flow from the heart ~ LateBloomer

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022

Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. Glad you liked it. Have a great day and take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

What a lovely poem:) Kate it's a lucky girl. "Through the days and years to come
May my good fortune be that she stands beside my gate
And joy and laughter fill our hearts
Oh my one and only Kate." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.

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 Comment Written 21-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022

Iza,
Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. Glad you enjoyed it .
Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold