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Mayflies

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Comment from kahpot
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An excellent haiku and the last line is superb giving wonderful imagery to the reader, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
    Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
    John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Those wonderful scenes near the pond as life becomes precarious for those mayflies as they bob about and are caught by fish, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
    Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
    John
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That was very good, my friend. I use to love watching the mayflies over our pond, we don't have one now, but the memories of them are still there. This is a super contest entry, and I wish you the best of luck. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
    Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
    John
Comment from Fleedleflump
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I enjoyed your haiku - I like the implied convergence of natural and humanity, with the skipping, and then nature's full circle process with the fishes doing well for a meal in the last 'turn' line. Nicely written.

Mike

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
    Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
    John
Comment from Susan Newell
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I don't often review short poetry, but this one is a stunner. The last line is a real killer. One minor thing: it should be aerial, not arial (typeface and I think a Disney character). Thanks for the smile.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
    Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
    John
Comment from Faith Williams
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Wow! 300 Posts! Congratulations on your milestone. I enjoyed the imagery of your poem, especially the second line. The last line made me smile. A lovely poem.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
    Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
    John