Mayflies
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Comment from kahpot
An excellent haiku and the last line is superb giving wonderful imagery to the reader, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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An excellent haiku and the last line is superb giving wonderful imagery to the reader, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those wonderful scenes near the pond as life becomes precarious for those mayflies as they bob about and are caught by fish, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Those wonderful scenes near the pond as life becomes precarious for those mayflies as they bob about and are caught by fish, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was very good, my friend. I use to love watching the mayflies over our pond, we don't have one now, but the memories of them are still there. This is a super contest entry, and I wish you the best of luck. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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That was very good, my friend. I use to love watching the mayflies over our pond, we don't have one now, but the memories of them are still there. This is a super contest entry, and I wish you the best of luck. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
Comment from Fleedleflump
I enjoyed your haiku - I like the implied convergence of natural and humanity, with the skipping, and then nature's full circle process with the fishes doing well for a meal in the last 'turn' line. Nicely written.
Mike
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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I enjoyed your haiku - I like the implied convergence of natural and humanity, with the skipping, and then nature's full circle process with the fishes doing well for a meal in the last 'turn' line. Nicely written.
Mike
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
Comment from Susan Newell
I don't often review short poetry, but this one is a stunner. The last line is a real killer. One minor thing: it should be aerial, not arial (typeface and I think a Disney character). Thanks for the smile.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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I don't often review short poetry, but this one is a stunner. The last line is a real killer. One minor thing: it should be aerial, not arial (typeface and I think a Disney character). Thanks for the smile.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
Comment from Faith Williams
Wow! 300 Posts! Congratulations on your milestone. I enjoyed the imagery of your poem, especially the second line. The last line made me smile. A lovely poem.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Wow! 300 Posts! Congratulations on your milestone. I enjoyed the imagery of your poem, especially the second line. The last line made me smile. A lovely poem.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
