Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Supernatural Flash Fiction writing prompt contest.

I enjoyed reading anna's story. Good twist at the end.

It moved along nicely and the plot was intriguing. Good character development.

Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022

Thanks so much for this nice review. :)

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

Very very well done! I love the repeating line "Anna was lost". I can feel her frustration and when it dawns on her. Very sad but I'm glad she found peace in the end. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022

Thanks for this fantastic review, it makes my day. :)

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Extremely well done. I felt pulled to where the story went, and only towards the end did the bell strike twelve to have me realize Anna was
d e a d . Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022

Thank you for this thoughtful and encouraging review...it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Bridge

Excellent

A very well written story. I could kind of predict the end but still very well written. A great story. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

Yes, a bit predictable, but with a supernatural theme it's hard to think of something new. Thanks so much for reading. :)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is cleverly done. At first you think she must be going round in circles as can happen when one is lost. Gradually the truth dawns on the reader, just as it does on Anna. One is forced to wonder if violent death could be like that.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

I hope we never find out! Thank you for this thoughtful review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Your story gave me goosebumps! Well written! This circular recounting of Anna's journey and the accident seems to be well suited to the theme. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

Thanks so much for reading my story and for this positive review. :)

Comment from Dreamdancer

Excellent

Hello my friend...
WOW... such a tragic story but with a wonderful outcome. You pulled my in from start to finish... Very easy read... Thanks for sharing my friend... Dreamdancer

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

Thank you for this thoughtful review of my story, it's very appreciated. :)