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Comment from harmony13
Yes, the poem made me smile immediately! The author's words are
clear, interesting and creative. I thought about sometimes I like
recycling and sometimes I don't. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is awesome and compliments the words of this poem.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Yes, the poem made me smile immediately! The author's words are
clear, interesting and creative. I thought about sometimes I like
recycling and sometimes I don't. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is awesome and compliments the words of this poem.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much Harmony. Ready now for my demise! And not too much for the kids to worry about. Lol.
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
Thanks for sharing this humorous short-form poem. It's definitely "just for fun." The last line is great and very easy for any older person to understand. Good work working in rhymes that work into such a short poem.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thanks for sharing this humorous short-form poem. It's definitely "just for fun." The last line is great and very easy for any older person to understand. Good work working in rhymes that work into such a short poem.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
In the middle of clearing out my parents' house, I do wish they'd seen your advice before it was too late. Even the charity shop is growing fed-up of seeing me struggle in hidden behind a pile of cartons!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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In the middle of clearing out my parents' house, I do wish they'd seen your advice before it was too late. Even the charity shop is growing fed-up of seeing me struggle in hidden behind a pile of cartons!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Lol. Yes, I didn?t want to do that to my kids. My friend is also in that process. Not nice for them. Thanks so much for reviewing I appreciate it a lot.
Comment from jaded831
Getting organized can be exhausting, but so can being disorganized. I like midstream. I'm not fanatic like my brother, always complaining how tiered he is from organizing different projects. I really relate to this poem.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Getting organized can be exhausting, but so can being disorganized. I like midstream. I'm not fanatic like my brother, always complaining how tiered he is from organizing different projects. I really relate to this poem.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate your thoughts and review a lot.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Just yesterday, I cleaned out my desk three drawers. I can not believe how much stuff was in them. The drawers are not that big. Oh, well, it will not take long before they fill up again. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Just yesterday, I cleaned out my desk three drawers. I can not believe how much stuff was in them. The drawers are not that big. Oh, well, it will not take long before they fill up again. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Lol. Thank you Carolyn. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Dreamdancer
LOL... reminds me of my life which I call organized chaos! Walking into a room and forgetting why I walked in there in the first place and then I go squirl and off to something else... great read my friend... Dreamdancer
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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LOL... reminds me of my life which I call organized chaos! Walking into a room and forgetting why I walked in there in the first place and then I go squirl and off to something else... great read my friend... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Lol. Thank you so much!
Comment from LisaMay
haha... this reminds me of what my neighbour said to me one day when he saw me sweeping the front path: "Are you getting ready to sell the house? You never tidy up."
In your poem you've managed to get 3 rhymes in and give me a laugh - nice going.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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haha... this reminds me of what my neighbour said to me one day when he saw me sweeping the front path: "Are you getting ready to sell the house? You never tidy up."
In your poem you've managed to get 3 rhymes in and give me a laugh - nice going.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Lol. Thank you!
Comment from royowen
What an excellent post, I love this, (if you have any spare time?) yes indeed, decluttering, mmmh, we've solved we rarely buy anything extra these days, onky when something fails. Beautifully written.good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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What an excellent post, I love this, (if you have any spare time?) yes indeed, decluttering, mmmh, we've solved we rarely buy anything extra these days, onky when something fails. Beautifully written.good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you Roy!
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Most welcome
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A cute and colorful poem. I like the visual you selected. It fits well with the text. I like that the font is large and colorful. I would center it on the large visual, so the text is more prominent. I would also change the word "for" to before. I think that may sound better. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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A cute and colorful poem. I like the visual you selected. It fits well with the text. I like that the font is large and colorful. I would center it on the large visual, so the text is more prominent. I would also change the word "for" to before. I think that may sound better. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate your thoughts and insights. I can?t change to " before" because of the syllable restrictions but I like the thought of centring it. Thank you again.
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I understand. Good luck in the contest!
Comment from mermaids
I like your theme of de-cluttering, something I am doing right now. While your words are humorous, they have a good point, It is a good thing to de-clutter so our heirs will not have to spend days going through our stuff. Excellent poem.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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I like your theme of de-cluttering, something I am doing right now. While your words are humorous, they have a good point, It is a good thing to de-clutter so our heirs will not have to spend days going through our stuff. Excellent poem.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much. Always appreciated.
