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A Cat, Dog, And Hog

They sat on a log.

4 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet! You have two votes now.

I like the rhyme, I like cats and dogs and since I watched BABE the film , I would love to have a mini pig as a pet.

I think they look cute. I know George Clooney had a pet pig called Max that lived for 18 years.

I thought hogs were male-castrated pigs reared to be slaughtered. In your pic you have a female.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Does that matter I have a female?
    She is fat!
reply by tempeste on 19-Jun-2022
    No it was just an observation seeing you talk about a HOG.

    But yes she is certainly fat!

    I still liked the poem.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Have you read my To Dad poem?
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    🙂
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    🙂
reply by tempeste on 19-Jun-2022
    Sorry but I voted for Jake Cosmos Aller.

    My father was the complete opposite of yours.

    My father was sent to a seminary in Como for 6 years ..
    from age 13 to age 19 (1942-1948).

    You can imagine what 6 years of religious doctrine does to a person. They were taught that women were a tool of the devil.

    He was also a freak control.

    MY father was definitely not like your father.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Ok
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
    Please read my summer and winter poems.
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the fun contest
with the nice addition of the rhymes.
Perfect picture choice to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    Thanks, please read my other poems
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This haiku reminds me of a nursery rhyme. It meets the syllable requirements. The graphic is great. Because the graphic overpowers the presentation, I would enlarge the font, make it the color of the grass or hog, make it bold and center it under the hog. This way the text would become more prominent.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    Thanks! Please read my other recent poems.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 16-Jun-2022
    I will.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 16-Jun-2022
    Please also read some of my poems. Thanks
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    🙂
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
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Interesting! Looks like you properly followed the prompt; your syllables are right, and your subject is silly. I hope you do well in the contest! Good luck!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
    Thanks! Please read my other poems.