Mischievous Grandma
A little daughter payback.3 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Oh Grandma, you are awful! I guess you'll be going home as soon as you get a sniffy whiff. The kid gets the fun, and Mom gets the runs. Humorous payback indeed.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Oh Grandma, you are awful! I guess you'll be going home as soon as you get a sniffy whiff. The kid gets the fun, and Mom gets the runs. Humorous payback indeed.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Yep, I'm gone once there's an aroma. Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from SimianSavant
I guess someone gave this a crappy rating to go with the diaper, but this should help with that.
In case you are ever interested in eliminating the arbitrary line breaks, I might have mentioned this earlier but if not:
<div style="white-space:nowrap">â?¨(Put your content here,
with the desired
word wrapping and line breaks) â?¨</div>
Just remember you have to save it in the basic editor only.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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I guess someone gave this a crappy rating to go with the diaper, but this should help with that.
In case you are ever interested in eliminating the arbitrary line breaks, I might have mentioned this earlier but if not:
<div style="white-space:nowrap">â?¨(Put your content here,
with the desired
word wrapping and line breaks) â?¨</div>
Just remember you have to save it in the basic editor only.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the great review and big sixer, friend. It looks fine on my end. That's how I always do it, in basic editor first. Plus, all the code you offer just flies right over my head. Lol. I'm computer illiterate. Haha. Again, it looks like it's okay from my end. There aren't any line breaks besides where I dropped the lines for the 5-7-5. I really appreciate the sixer, D. I guess the first review was a newbie maybe. Who knows? Have a great weekend and thanks again.
Comment from Frank Malley
I would've titled this "Gramma gets it done." " Mischievious Grandma" works, too. This kind of poem, a 5-7-5, sets so many limits on what a poem can say that I never use them except perhaps to enter a contest. This poem has a crude punch line and anyone who has cared for infants will get it.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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I would've titled this "Gramma gets it done." " Mischievious Grandma" works, too. This kind of poem, a 5-7-5, sets so many limits on what a poem can say that I never use them except perhaps to enter a contest. This poem has a crude punch line and anyone who has cared for infants will get it.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thanks for the 4 stars. Any suggestions on improvement rather than a title change?
