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That Special Time Awaits

Will join father in Heaven.

37 total reviews 
Comment from Julcia
Exceptional
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A meaningful account of your relationship with your biological father. He
remarried soon after your parents divorced and had two additional children. A well written true story. I enjoyed particularly the end of your story. You appear
to have a great relationship with God, the Maker of both you and your father.
Best of luck, Julcia

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2022

Comment from Goodadvicechan
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Your story is very moving. No one can feel what Your emotional attachment is. Only you, yourself could understand how it feels. The disappointment, hopelessness, anger... your jealous sister must have her own reason. Let it be the past.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2022

Comment from Dreamdancer
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A very sad piece my friend and one that I can relate to. I also raised by my maternal grandmother and never knew my father and like you someday I will meet him... Thanks for sharing a piece of your life... Dreamdancer

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2022

Comment from mermaids
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I am glad you will meet your father in heaven. The reader wonders why he did not keep in touch with you, it is hard to understand people's actions sometimes. Your story is well written and holds the reader's interest. Excellent writing and I believe many can relate to your story.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I'm wondering myself why she cut off the communications. It doesn't seem right. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

Comment from nomi338
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I do not wish to enter into an argument or get involved in a serious debate with you. That being said, I must say that I believe in the Bible's assertion that only a limited number of humans will be going to heaven, the majority of the dead and saved humans will either be resurrected to life on earth on the ones alive at the time of the end will remain here on the earth. Death of course will done away with and there will be no more dying. It is entirely possible that your reunion will take place here on Earth, which should not be a barrier to the reunion itself. Good luck to you. I have a similar experience to yours, but I am my father's only child.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

Comment from lyenochka
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I'm so sorry for these multiple losses! Not only did you not have your father, everyone seemed to be keeping him away from you. Perhaps your half-sister was jealous of your "pretend father" and her real life relationship wasn't as good. Thanks for sharing. Hope you do well in the contest!
Comments:
I took pictures of he and my mother (him) object of the preposition 'of'
She had been 'daddies' little girl'. (Daddy's)

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

Comment from John Ciarmello
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I'm sorry for you and your sister's misfortunes with a relationship. Perhaps you can't force destiny, and it was meant not to continue for one reason or another.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

Comment from Bridge
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A very interesting story. I was with you every step of the way. I'm very sorry about your father. Very well written. Thanks for sharing. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

Comment from Mary Vigasin
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I found this profoundly sad. You want a relationship with a dad who I could had no heart. He walked away without looking back. I also see that his daughter in Florida has his indifference. You are hurting at this rejection.
Take care of yourself.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022