Haiku-5/6/4 (angry tidal seas)
A Site Contest Entry15 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
What a clever way to put it - nature saying no thanks, I didn't ask for this - please return to sender. Its advance that the majority of people seem to be uncaring, unthinking idiots.
Great piece.
Mike
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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What a clever way to put it - nature saying no thanks, I didn't ask for this - please return to sender. Its advance that the majority of people seem to be uncaring, unthinking idiots.
Great piece.
Mike
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your understanding comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Good poem and the syllable count is on point. The visual fits perfectly, but the photo is repulsive. I do not understand that level of pollution. Basically, I do not understand why anyone would pollute. You have written a poem you can be proud of. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Good poem and the syllable count is on point. The visual fits perfectly, but the photo is repulsive. I do not understand that level of pollution. Basically, I do not understand why anyone would pollute. You have written a poem you can be proud of. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your excellent comments and review, always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are welcome.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This picture is a disgusting example of our lifestyles, but your poem is quite accurate and damning. We are not doing well by our world. Best of luck in the Haiku poetry contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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This picture is a disgusting example of our lifestyles, but your poem is quite accurate and damning. We are not doing well by our world. Best of luck in the Haiku poetry contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How tragic this scene is and unbelievable too. I would like to know where this shot was taken, your words are powerful and we should all take note here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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How tragic this scene is and unbelievable too. I would like to know where this shot was taken, your words are powerful and we should all take note here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, that is disgraceful indeed. And that picture makes me worried for the smiling child in those polluted waters! I like your personification of the seas throwing back all the garbage back onto the shore.
Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Oh, that is disgraceful indeed. And that picture makes me worried for the smiling child in those polluted waters! I like your personification of the seas throwing back all the garbage back onto the shore.
Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, and yes it is disgraceful all our pollution, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
