Haiku-5/6/4 (angry tidal seas)
A Site Contest Entry15 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
You created a strong message about the environmental pollution that pervades our society. You paired a good photograph to reinforce your verse.
I do like your first line phrase.
Mark
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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You created a strong message about the environmental pollution that pervades our society. You paired a good photograph to reinforce your verse.
I do like your first line phrase.
Mark
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the. Haiku Poetry contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the. Haiku Poetry contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Sad, but true. Humans have done the most damage to this planet of ours. And most will still ignore the consequences of their carelessness. Your haiku is on point.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Sad, but true. Humans have done the most damage to this planet of ours. And most will still ignore the consequences of their carelessness. Your haiku is on point.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you, yes so very sad, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Angry Tidal Seas, presented as a 5-6-4, shows the readers the results of mankind's unnecessary waste come back to plague others.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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This haiku, Angry Tidal Seas, presented as a 5-6-4, shows the readers the results of mankind's unnecessary waste come back to plague others.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry highlights the sad state of the
me, me, me society. Your words are well chosen
and create great imagery. Great job with the style
of haiku. Mankind has polluted, and continues to
pollute the life out of our oceans. Will this ever
change?
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Your contest entry highlights the sad state of the
me, me, me society. Your words are well chosen
and create great imagery. Great job with the style
of haiku. Mankind has polluted, and continues to
pollute the life out of our oceans. Will this ever
change?
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is gross. The people who throw out garbage should be ashamed of themselves. This is terrible. There is no sense in this happening. Thank you for the awareness. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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This is gross. The people who throw out garbage should be ashamed of themselves. This is terrible. There is no sense in this happening. Thank you for the awareness. Have a great day.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review, very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are welcome.
Comment from Val Crisson
How SADLY true. We live a beach in southern California that is considered a reserve so the beach is wild or true to it's nature. Yet, there's always that piece of "crap" You found an amazing picture to provide a vivid picture. The set up on this is haiku very traditional, which I find refreshing. Lovely
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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How SADLY true. We live a beach in southern California that is considered a reserve so the beach is wild or true to it's nature. Yet, there's always that piece of "crap" You found an amazing picture to provide a vivid picture. The set up on this is haiku very traditional, which I find refreshing. Lovely
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you, yes it is sad but true, your comments and review are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
These few syllables are really powerfully used. The theme of mankind's negligence of nature--often beyond just negligence--is well conveyed, and the photo adds a real punch!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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These few syllables are really powerfully used. The theme of mankind's negligence of nature--often beyond just negligence--is well conveyed, and the photo adds a real punch!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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It is REALLY good!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes. This is so true. Angry nature shows us our human disgrace. When a storm washes in all the debris that humankind creates nature tells us in no uncertain terms that we have blown it big time!
This is a very telling Haiku. A warning to all of us what we have done to help create what is known as Climate Change.
Thanks for the warning!
Jesse
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Yes. This is so true. Angry nature shows us our human disgrace. When a storm washes in all the debris that humankind creates nature tells us in no uncertain terms that we have blown it big time!
This is a very telling Haiku. A warning to all of us what we have done to help create what is known as Climate Change.
Thanks for the warning!
Jesse
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Jesse, yes our disregard for our home is quite disgraceful, and I hope more understand as you do, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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So do I!
Comment from John Ciarmello
I'm far from naive to the destruction man has placed upon this earth, but I would have never thought there could be a place like this. A place neglected and accepted so readily. This is an awareness piece and an image I will remember for a long time. Your words ring true and only extenuate man's destruction and nature's wrath of retaliation. Well done, my friend, kahpot!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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I'm far from naive to the destruction man has placed upon this earth, but I would have never thought there could be a place like this. A place neglected and accepted so readily. This is an awareness piece and an image I will remember for a long time. Your words ring true and only extenuate man's destruction and nature's wrath of retaliation. Well done, my friend, kahpot!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
