Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
The romance is going one, let's hope no more disturbances into their love life and no more ex-ese with their hexes:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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The romance is going one, let's hope no more disturbances into their love life and no more ex-ese with their hexes:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Another ex will show up. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
Dang! Ali and Cord are so good together. Like Katherine and Coach, they seemed to belong together for all time and there was always an eternal presence about them (and I don't mean that in a religious way, but that they were star-blest, if you will)!
After the pizzas were eaten and Cordero paid, [perhaps "Cordero HAD paid" so it doesn't sound like he received money.]
She released a deep breath and pointed. "That Luke guy." [There was a good internal echo when I saw his name and remembered the earlier incident. The tension has been revved up greatly now. Good work!]
"I'm sure it wasn't, but I have a feeling you enjoyed it." [That had me laughing out loud!]
Cordero verified the brand inside the bull's ear. [That wasn't where you said the blue Christian fish was earlier. Oops, I didn't read far enough. Sorry, my mistake. Cattle ranchers must have had hidden brands everywhere!]
One of your best chapters, Barbara! Now that his calloused hand almost decapitated a girly part of Ali, won't you at least reward your reader with a kiss? (I'm just continuing the tease about how you're suspending that moment.)
Jay
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Dang! Ali and Cord are so good together. Like Katherine and Coach, they seemed to belong together for all time and there was always an eternal presence about them (and I don't mean that in a religious way, but that they were star-blest, if you will)!
After the pizzas were eaten and Cordero paid, [perhaps "Cordero HAD paid" so it doesn't sound like he received money.]
She released a deep breath and pointed. "That Luke guy." [There was a good internal echo when I saw his name and remembered the earlier incident. The tension has been revved up greatly now. Good work!]
"I'm sure it wasn't, but I have a feeling you enjoyed it." [That had me laughing out loud!]
Cordero verified the brand inside the bull's ear. [That wasn't where you said the blue Christian fish was earlier. Oops, I didn't read far enough. Sorry, my mistake. Cattle ranchers must have had hidden brands everywhere!]
One of your best chapters, Barbara! Now that his calloused hand almost decapitated a girly part of Ali, won't you at least reward your reader with a kiss? (I'm just continuing the tease about how you're suspending that moment.)
Jay
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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I can promise a kiss, at exactly the right moment. LOL Thank you.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a great chapter. It was pretty exciting with finding the bull and then the rant with Joyce. She seems to be mad all the time and also lies saying she didn't get the message. Cord had enough of her long before he met Ali.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This is a great chapter. It was pretty exciting with finding the bull and then the rant with Joyce. She seems to be mad all the time and also lies saying she didn't get the message. Cord had enough of her long before he met Ali.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Yes, Cord was fed up with Joyce. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, so sentiments are running high in this chapter I liked how Cordero dealt wit Joyce. Good on him. I still in enjoying this is story, brand I'm looking forward to it what's next. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Hi Barbara, so sentiments are running high in this chapter I liked how Cordero dealt wit Joyce. Good on him. I still in enjoying this is story, brand I'm looking forward to it what's next. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
