Heaven Drenched
Love poem contest18 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Amazing poetry, my friend. How I have missed you! This is laced in gold and flaming hot! Whew! Burning down the FanStory house! Another contest winner, I see. Beautifully penned and illustrated as always.
Sending you my best today, and six stars to bless,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Amazing poetry, my friend. How I have missed you! This is laced in gold and flaming hot! Whew! Burning down the FanStory house! Another contest winner, I see. Beautifully penned and illustrated as always.
Sending you my best today, and six stars to bless,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Hi Sally! Sigh, yes life seems to be a bit overwhelming lately... but I just needed to write something! and well,... I saw the LOVE contest and maybe FS needs a little more heat LOL Thank you for this wonderful review! I so appreciate it! Have a lovely Sunday!! :-))))))))))))))))
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You are most welcome! Yes, FanStory needs a lot of things at the moment. You are dearly missed! Thank you for the unexpected blessings! Sal :))))))))
Comment from kahpot
Yes, you have in this beautifully written poem described the souls, hearts, of two people loving as one, "to share in wonderous ecstasy" your descriptive words throughout are excellent, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Yes, you have in this beautifully written poem described the souls, hearts, of two people loving as one, "to share in wonderous ecstasy" your descriptive words throughout are excellent, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you! The review is wonderful, and I appreciate all those stars! Thank you for taking the time to read and review! Enjoy your Sunday :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An amazing love poem filled with the close loving encounter between lovers and I loved the descriptions and rhymes. A perfectly metered poem richly worded and a winner for the contest Susan, a delightful read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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An amazing love poem filled with the close loving encounter between lovers and I loved the descriptions and rhymes. A perfectly metered poem richly worded and a winner for the contest Susan, a delightful read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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DOLLY :-) ( I'm still thinking about your poppy sonnet) Thank you for reading and leaving me this sweet review! Those stars are appreciated too :-)
Comment from Fleedleflump
This has a great combination of sweet love and raunchy passion, twin themes twined like lovers twixt the sheets. Beautifully written and metered, with some interesting pairings and a slight sense of fun. I very much enjoyed.
Mike
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This has a great combination of sweet love and raunchy passion, twin themes twined like lovers twixt the sheets. Beautifully written and metered, with some interesting pairings and a slight sense of fun. I very much enjoyed.
Mike
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Well ya know a love poem has to have a bit of both huh ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing! Much appreciated :-)
Comment from leather
This poem comes with quite a presentation with abstract, watercolor-like artwork, a good contest between background and text colors, and style of lettering. The poem is lovely and error free.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This poem comes with quite a presentation with abstract, watercolor-like artwork, a good contest between background and text colors, and style of lettering. The poem is lovely and error free.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you kindly! A smile-making review! :-)
Comment from royowen
An excellent post my friend, such great language, rarely do we see imagery such as this, your flow and rhythmic flow are good. The abab rhyming is good and the theme is spot on fo the contest, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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An excellent post my friend, such great language, rarely do we see imagery such as this, your flow and rhythmic flow are good. The abab rhyming is good and the theme is spot on fo the contest, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Roy, I know just what a gifted poet you are. Your words and poetry are beyond exceptional. I wish I could be a little more active on this site. Your review really makes me smile. Have a beautiful Sunday :-)
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Well done Susan
Comment from Whitewave
Susan,
A very appealing mix of colors in your picture and your words of 'Heaven Drenched' love. I have always liked the way dominoes fall, each gently influencing the next to a soft position of collapse.
The 'lover's dance of give 'n take' is essential to every relationship we choose to make.
(Is this a typo? easedrop Should it say eavesdrop?)
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Susan,
A very appealing mix of colors in your picture and your words of 'Heaven Drenched' love. I have always liked the way dominoes fall, each gently influencing the next to a soft position of collapse.
The 'lover's dance of give 'n take' is essential to every relationship we choose to make.
(Is this a typo? easedrop Should it say eavesdrop?)
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review!! I appreciate you taking the time to read. Dominoes! So much patience required... Yes, typo! And thank you for pointing that out.
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have taken the writing prompt and done an excellent job with it. This is a love poem if ever I read one. The artwork is exquisite. I see you entered this in the contest so I wish you best of luck in the voting.
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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You have taken the writing prompt and done an excellent job with it. This is a love poem if ever I read one. The artwork is exquisite. I see you entered this in the contest so I wish you best of luck in the voting.
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you Prettybluebirds for taking the time to read and leave me a lovely review! I appreciate it! Fingers crossed on the voting! ;-) Have a wonderful evening.
