Bitter-sweet
The journey, then and now11 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
This makes interesting reading, learning what has motivated you over the years. The inclusion of rhyme adds even more interest - a poetic crossover that ties writing strands of poetry and prose together.
I also think from time to time your writing will have a nutty flavour, haha. (or maybe that will be when Sunny is writing.... yes, I recognise your style.)
For consistency, make your last Now paragraph coloured purple.)
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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This makes interesting reading, learning what has motivated you over the years. The inclusion of rhyme adds even more interest - a poetic crossover that ties writing strands of poetry and prose together.
I also think from time to time your writing will have a nutty flavour, haha. (or maybe that will be when Sunny is writing.... yes, I recognise your style.)
For consistency, make your last Now paragraph coloured purple.)
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Ha, not a great deal of detective work needed there! Yes, there could be quite a lot of nutty pieces in the mix. When Sunny writes, he only shares the bare bones of the matter - I suppose there are sometimes meaty bits from him, but no chocolate. Thanks for the tip re the last paragraph. More haste, less speed, as the saying goes. Thanks for a super review. I hoped there weren't too many different threads in it. In fact I have just edited it again. Many thanks for your kindness!
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A pleasure and an addiction sums it up well.
