An Acrostic-(when I said no)
No means No16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, WHEN I SAID NO, follows the first-letter theme and brings an uplifting tale that finds the damaged and abused receiving some justice. Rare and always good to hear about.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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This acrostic poem, WHEN I SAID NO, follows the first-letter theme and brings an uplifting tale that finds the damaged and abused receiving some justice. Rare and always good to hear about.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you, yes it is good to see justice, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the
Excellent entry for the Rhyming Poem contest.
Good Acrostic form. The rhyme is pretty good too. You used descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Child abuse is a hideous crime that affect victims all their lives...good topic.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid". - Atticus
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the
Excellent entry for the Rhyming Poem contest.
Good Acrostic form. The rhyme is pretty good too. You used descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Child abuse is a hideous crime that affect victims all their lives...good topic.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid". - Atticus
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you for these wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Good for her! It's time for young ones to speak out for themselves and preserve their dignity and their future. I'm glad she shared her experience with you - and you shared it with us in poetic form. Thank you!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Good for her! It's time for young ones to speak out for themselves and preserve their dignity and their future. I'm glad she shared her experience with you - and you shared it with us in poetic form. Thank you!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from C.A.Currie
Weah-Ha!!! You sure know how to do it! That is one nice Acrostic! You told the story very well!
Thanks so much for sharing one of my favorite styles of poetry!
And thanks again for doing it so well!
Hugs and Lillipops from my heart to yours!
~ Christine ~
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Weah-Ha!!! You sure know how to do it! That is one nice Acrostic! You told the story very well!
Thanks so much for sharing one of my favorite styles of poetry!
And thanks again for doing it so well!
Hugs and Lillipops from my heart to yours!
~ Christine ~
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Wow! thank you so very much, I am so very happy that I got it right, your six stars, hugs, and lillipops are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully written rhyming acrostic conveys a powerful message about the power the word "NO" should wield; sometimes it just takes a while for people to HEAR it!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Your skillfully written rhyming acrostic conveys a powerful message about the power the word "NO" should wield; sometimes it just takes a while for people to HEAR it!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
I guess all I can say there's been a lot of this over the years, I ver seen a fair bit, but one could conclude girls were made to looked after, beautifully written my friend, this is a great post, a good rhyming poem, well worded, good job,good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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I guess all I can say there's been a lot of this over the years, I ver seen a fair bit, but one could conclude girls were made to looked after, beautifully written my friend, this is a great post, a good rhyming poem, well worded, good job,good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Roy, yes way too much of this keeps happening, your encouraging comments are very much appreciated****kahpot
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Well done
Comment from country ranch writer
6/9/2022------4:08am.
When some one says NO! It should be heard but people turn a deaf ear.Because all a man thinks he hears is yes.Lust takes over and her raps for the thrill and release of his excitement. The oredeters keep on till they get caught.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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6/9/2022------4:08am.
When some one says NO! It should be heard but people turn a deaf ear.Because all a man thinks he hears is yes.Lust takes over and her raps for the thrill and release of his excitement. The oredeters keep on till they get caught.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you, and yes men do seem to hear what they want and or need, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Whitewave
kahpot,
You have written a very clever acrostic verse with a powerful message I think we all need to hear. It conveys a feeling of great strength and courage to stand firm and say, 'NO', especially when no-one listens or supports your truth.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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kahpot,
You have written a very clever acrostic verse with a powerful message I think we all need to hear. It conveys a feeling of great strength and courage to stand firm and say, 'NO', especially when no-one listens or supports your truth.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, yes we must listen and stop this/any sort of abuse, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Welcome back, Kahpot!!
Great poem that shows us that a child/young girl was able to say, NO. And stand up against those who could take advantage of her. Great rhymes! Best wishes in the contest!
Question:
I bared that shame, in words of tears (Did you mean the 'bare' -to reveal? Or "bore" to bear that shame?)
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Welcome back, Kahpot!!
Great poem that shows us that a child/young girl was able to say, NO. And stand up against those who could take advantage of her. Great rhymes! Best wishes in the contest!
Question:
I bared that shame, in words of tears (Did you mean the 'bare' -to reveal? Or "bore" to bear that shame?)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you so very much, (bared) as in she was in tears when testifying-think I got it right? as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Ah, then it's perfect. Just checked because it could have gone either way and those verbs are similar!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write about child sexual abuse and your rhymes and flow are perfectly aligned and this is a skilful and clever write about a heinous crime, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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A poignant write about child sexual abuse and your rhymes and flow are perfectly aligned and this is a skilful and clever write about a heinous crime, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful and understanding review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
