Sadness
Unfairness of age10 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I can relate. In my head, I am young and thin. In the mirror, not so much. Thank you so much for choosing to share this poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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I can relate. In my head, I am young and thin. In the mirror, not so much. Thank you so much for choosing to share this poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Jess. My soltion was I didn't look in the mirror much. LOL Blessings, Barbara
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh Barbara, this poem resonates with a deep meaning and emotion. Your character portrays the thoughts a lot of us have about aging and changes we make as we grow older. Well written!
Melissa
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Oh Barbara, this poem resonates with a deep meaning and emotion. Your character portrays the thoughts a lot of us have about aging and changes we make as we grow older. Well written!
Melissa
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Melissa. Your kind words are much appreciated. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from irishauthorme
Wow, I have the same problem, I look and wonder, "Who is that Old Man?"
However, I am fortunate to have good health(so far!) and while I am able to still do a lot of things;
put in the garden,
do the weed-eating
mow the lawns
fix leaks in the 4 watering systems
maintain an obstinate attitude
That's about it!
irish
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Wow, I have the same problem, I look and wonder, "Who is that Old Man?"
However, I am fortunate to have good health(so far!) and while I am able to still do a lot of things;
put in the garden,
do the weed-eating
mow the lawns
fix leaks in the 4 watering systems
maintain an obstinate attitude
That's about it!
irish
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you, irish. Amen you are Blessed as am I. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello LovNPeace, Barbara, good descriptive writing. Of special note:
where is my image
(B, it's shining inside your heart. You just have to look a little closer
'cause we all see it.)
Yes, aging is unfair, but the knowledge that comes with it is priceless ... just like you. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Hello LovNPeace, Barbara, good descriptive writing. Of special note:
where is my image
(B, it's shining inside your heart. You just have to look a little closer
'cause we all see it.)
Yes, aging is unfair, but the knowledge that comes with it is priceless ... just like you. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you, M. You are so sweet. A special friend. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from Sally Law
I know the feeling. I have learned to embrace the new me and the beauty and wisdom of old age. That never fades. Sending you my best today as always and love and blessings for your day,
Sally xoxo's
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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I know the feeling. I have learned to embrace the new me and the beauty and wisdom of old age. That never fades. Sending you my best today as always and love and blessings for your day,
Sally xoxo's
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Sally. I have accepted it. I never was obsessed with looks. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from Fleedleflump
I like that this can be interpreter many times - somebody aged beyond their self image, a sad reflection after disfigurement, or somebody whose own actions have alienated them from themselves. Beautifully written.
Mike
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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I like that this can be interpreter many times - somebody aged beyond their self image, a sad reflection after disfigurement, or somebody whose own actions have alienated them from themselves. Beautifully written.
Mike
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Mike. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from tfawcus
There is beauty of a different kind in a face that bears the brushstrokes of a life well-lived. It is a more enduring form of beauty than the blank canvas of youth.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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There is beauty of a different kind in a face that bears the brushstrokes of a life well-lived. It is a more enduring form of beauty than the blank canvas of youth.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you, What a nice thing to say. I like how you think. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I feel exactly the same, who is that person staring back at me? Youth is gone and the face sags into an abyss! All we can do is know that inside we are still 16, a poignant write Barbara, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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I feel exactly the same, who is that person staring back at me? Youth is gone and the face sags into an abyss! All we can do is know that inside we are still 16, a poignant write Barbara, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Bless you Dear Dollly. Thanl you. !6 is good. Love, Barbara
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I liked this piece. It's sort of formatted like a senryu with the short staccato lines. It also speaks a universal truth which most of us can relate to.
I don't really get it in the mirror though, more over when looking at old photos and folk say 'that's not you!'
Nice one
G
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Hi there,
I liked this piece. It's sort of formatted like a senryu with the short staccato lines. It also speaks a universal truth which most of us can relate to.
I don't really get it in the mirror though, more over when looking at old photos and folk say 'that's not you!'
Nice one
G
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you, G. I get the same with pictures. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is a very well written short poem about the unfairness of aging. You used very good descriptive words. When we look in the mirror sometimes we don't see our younger self any longer. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Barbara, This is a very well written short poem about the unfairness of aging. You used very good descriptive words. When we look in the mirror sometimes we don't see our younger self any longer. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Dear Teri. Love and Blessings, Barbara
