Remembering Yesterday
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Comment from royowen
Things ate still particularly difficult for you, with Evan with extremely high blood pressure, it's amazing how things can be more difficult when you have four kids, we had only two, but perhaps we were lucky, beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy
Typo : He had no job, (d) 2: Now he considered himself (he was) deeply in love.
3: And she(')d willingly
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Things ate still particularly difficult for you, with Evan with extremely high blood pressure, it's amazing how things can be more difficult when you have four kids, we had only two, but perhaps we were lucky, beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy
Typo : He had no job, (d) 2: Now he considered himself (he was) deeply in love.
3: And she(')d willingly
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for the review and for catching those mistakes. I don't know how I miss those after reading over in several time but I always seem to. Maybe you an optimist and you remember only the good things and forget the little irritations. I think we all have them. Some people only remember the bad. I think I remember both, I hope my story isn't coming across as all bad because it really wasn't.
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No, I remember the bad, but they were genuinely small, of little consequence, perhaps I?ve been very fortunate, I?ve lost a lot of friends to the ?big sleep? but it?s true that my childhood is shrouded. Perhaps it?s a defence mechanism,
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Again, thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading and I know it will help others.
The top number was well over 200 and the lower number over a 100f. (not sure they the 'f' is there)
. Christi thought he looked like a model.(model for a crime poster, maybe?) (space needed after the period)
I needed my own mom's help, and shed willingly came through for me. Could I do less for our daughter? (she'd???)
As soon as school was out for the semester, She and Charlie took off for (lower case 's' on 'she')
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Again, thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading and I know it will help others.
The top number was well over 200 and the lower number over a 100f. (not sure they the 'f' is there)
. Christi thought he looked like a model.(model for a crime poster, maybe?) (space needed after the period)
I needed my own mom's help, and shed willingly came through for me. Could I do less for our daughter? (she'd???)
As soon as school was out for the semester, She and Charlie took off for (lower case 's' on 'she')
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. Thanks for picking up on the spags too. I read over at least four time but always miss stuff.
Beth
