Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

I love Autumn and have been looking forward to reading the poems for this challenge.

You took a different route with this entry and I appreciate that. Good luck, you should do well.

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 Comment Written 02-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 5-7-5 for the Autumn contest
with very good imagery of nature.
Somewhat different from the usual poem of leaves and colors.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert

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 Comment Written 02-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022

Great reveiw zanya