Blessed
Be a helper and supporter.53 total reviews
Comment from C T Curtis
I really enjoyed reading this poem. The poem is well thought out, meaningful, and awesome. I especially like the "be the one who brings the light." Very well written.
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. The poem is well thought out, meaningful, and awesome. I especially like the "be the one who brings the light." Very well written.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
Comment from mermaids
Excellent poem that reminds the reader how to live. I like your theme of thinking of others first, a thought we need to return to as human beings."Be the one who brings the light" is a wonderful life that gives the reader much to think about. Excellent use of words and I admire your smooth flow of rhyming words.
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Excellent poem that reminds the reader how to live. I like your theme of thinking of others first, a thought we need to return to as human beings."Be the one who brings the light" is a wonderful life that gives the reader much to think about. Excellent use of words and I admire your smooth flow of rhyming words.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
Comment from amahra
Very nice artwork. First time I'd ever seen a photo of Christ smiling. Great choice! Loved the poem. Thought it rhymed rather well. Nice rhymic flow and a good life lesson. Great job!
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Very nice artwork. First time I'd ever seen a photo of Christ smiling. Great choice! Loved the poem. Thought it rhymed rather well. Nice rhymic flow and a good life lesson. Great job!
Comment Written 30-May-2022
Comment from emmaysavage
I really liked the rhymes and the imperative mood. Your rhymes and your choice of words give practical meaning to the word Blessed. Thank you for this
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I really liked the rhymes and the imperative mood. Your rhymes and your choice of words give practical meaning to the word Blessed. Thank you for this
Comment Written 30-May-2022
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a straightforward message, laced with your clear intent and desire to be a balm. There are some lovely turns of phrase throughout and a gentle sense of certainty. Very well written.
Mike
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This is a straightforward message, laced with your clear intent and desire to be a balm. There are some lovely turns of phrase throughout and a gentle sense of certainty. Very well written.
Mike
Comment Written 30-May-2022
Comment from C2
Nice poem. Very encouraging and a great reminder that it is better to give than to receive. "Be the one who brings the light," will be a motto I take with me long after I have forgotten the source. Thank you for sharing!
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Nice poem. Very encouraging and a great reminder that it is better to give than to receive. "Be the one who brings the light," will be a motto I take with me long after I have forgotten the source. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 30-May-2022
Comment from GeraldShuler
This poem flows very smoothly. Rhyming is consistent and adds to the flow without any "tripping". I enjoyed this poem on several levels. My favorite thing is that you shared a true path to happiness.
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This poem flows very smoothly. Rhyming is consistent and adds to the flow without any "tripping". I enjoyed this poem on several levels. My favorite thing is that you shared a true path to happiness.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem it has a nice flow and rhyme. Nice photo to compliment your words. Very nicely done. I pray for the families of the teachers and little children. There are no words to describe how I feel for the families and their grief.
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This is a beautifully written poem it has a nice flow and rhyme. Nice photo to compliment your words. Very nicely done. I pray for the families of the teachers and little children. There are no words to describe how I feel for the families and their grief.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the artwork, notes, and poem, Willie.
-It is so sad what is happening around the world, but we have
to keep praying for things to change and get better.
-You wrote a very good poem about it.
-You have many good examples of how we should
be thinking of those who may need an extra bit of support,
and also deserve our thanks for what they do for us,
like "our heroes who have fought."
-A very nice tribute.
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-Thanks for sharing the artwork, notes, and poem, Willie.
-It is so sad what is happening around the world, but we have
to keep praying for things to change and get better.
-You wrote a very good poem about it.
-You have many good examples of how we should
be thinking of those who may need an extra bit of support,
and also deserve our thanks for what they do for us,
like "our heroes who have fought."
-A very nice tribute.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
Comment from LisaMay
If only we could all follow these desirable pathways to living contented lives. You've expressed a way to live that Jesus encouraged, where people look outward to be helpful to others, not consumed with selfishness.
You have expressed this really well - simple and direct, fuss-free and sincere.
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If only we could all follow these desirable pathways to living contented lives. You've expressed a way to live that Jesus encouraged, where people look outward to be helpful to others, not consumed with selfishness.
You have expressed this really well - simple and direct, fuss-free and sincere.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
