"The Book of Death"
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Comment from country ranch writer
We need faster response time in situations like this! Lives could have been saved!
How did he get on school grounds.
How did he get the two rifles into the class room
How come response time was too long
How did he get past school security!
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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We need faster response time in situations like this! Lives could have been saved!
How did he get on school grounds.
How did he get the two rifles into the class room
How come response time was too long
How did he get past school security!
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Your comments are correct But unfortunately,
Way too late.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from oliver818
It's important to talk about this so it's good to see it mentioned on this site. Personally, I think it's not very important what drove him to do it- kids all around the world feel left out and let down- but more why he was able to shoot people. In other countries with stricter gun control laws, the worst he could have done was stabbed people which is stil bad but not as bad. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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It's important to talk about this so it's good to see it mentioned on this site. Personally, I think it's not very important what drove him to do it- kids all around the world feel left out and let down- but more why he was able to shoot people. In other countries with stricter gun control laws, the worst he could have done was stabbed people which is stil bad but not as bad. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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My mind fought the same thing what I hadn't seen anybody picking this up on Fanstory.
I will write another part and update on this in a couple weeks.
Thanks Oliver.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces the covert reasons that give rise to the vexed massacre of school children and the imperative of surveillance officials getting abreast with them if they are to ever nip the problem at the bud.
The work highlights the population depletion occasioned by the massacre; the mindlessness of the people of Texas as opposed to the concerns expressed by the father
of the shooter and the generality of Americans; supposed inferences that prompted the shooting; omissions on the part of federal officers and the police; children texting for help in the midst of the shooting; and the overt clueless ness of humanity in getting abreast with why these shootings are perpetrated.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of irony, assonances, alliterations, similes, metaphors and imagery
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the covert reasons that give rise to the vexed massacre of school children and the imperative of surveillance officials getting abreast with them if they are to ever nip the problem at the bud.
The work highlights the population depletion occasioned by the massacre; the mindlessness of the people of Texas as opposed to the concerns expressed by the father
of the shooter and the generality of Americans; supposed inferences that prompted the shooting; omissions on the part of federal officers and the police; children texting for help in the midst of the shooting; and the overt clueless ness of humanity in getting abreast with why these shootings are perpetrated.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of irony, assonances, alliterations, similes, metaphors and imagery
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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I will write an update on this in about another two to three weeks.
And, we will see how things change in the way Texas handles governing their school systems.
Thanks Lloyd as always,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from tfawcus
Nicely written, Ricky. I believe your conclusion is sound and perhaps more germane than focussing on the gun lobby. The root has to be to identify, understand, and treat the fundamental psychological causes of these tragic events.
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Nicely written, Ricky. I believe your conclusion is sound and perhaps more germane than focussing on the gun lobby. The root has to be to identify, understand, and treat the fundamental psychological causes of these tragic events.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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It all starts in the classroom but not the way it went down here.
Yes, we have to educate, teach the children, the dangers of addictions.
And, alcoholism.
Unlawfull deadly force.
I do believe if guns were governed properly?
Yes, and used only by the police, military, and mature hunters, whom keep them locked up.
Then possibly, we wouldn't have as many problems.
The average citizen is not mature enough to to conceal, and handle a weapon.
When it comes to leaving it in the household to protect the family.
The horror stories are everyday when it comes to that.
Thanks tfawcus can have a blessed Sabbath Sunday!
Doctor Ricky
