Will We Survive
Time will tell-aabb63 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
In this expressive, moving poem, you have vividly described the chaos and numerous reasons for fear in the present time--and what we're leaving behind for our descendants.
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In this expressive, moving poem, you have vividly described the chaos and numerous reasons for fear in the present time--and what we're leaving behind for our descendants.
Comment Written 29-May-2022
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well said, Jaybird! There is a ball of confusion and it is the planet earth. Wars and shootings and pestilence and greed all add to the stress we feel deep in our hearts. Your rhymes are top-notch and the flow works well. This is a good one, maybe one of your best.
Have a good memorial weekend!
Jesse
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Well said, Jaybird! There is a ball of confusion and it is the planet earth. Wars and shootings and pestilence and greed all add to the stress we feel deep in our hearts. Your rhymes are top-notch and the flow works well. This is a good one, maybe one of your best.
Have a good memorial weekend!
Jesse
Comment Written 29-May-2022
Comment from jessizero
I can see why this is All Time Best. Will we survive? We must wait and see. Thank you so much for sharing this here. It is food for thought. Best wishes.
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I can see why this is All Time Best. Will we survive? We must wait and see. Thank you so much for sharing this here. It is food for thought. Best wishes.
Comment Written 29-May-2022
Comment from pome lover
Sir, I understand everything you said and I worry, also, about our country and I am angry at those determined to destroy it. Sometimes I wonder if God isn't saying, "I gave you everything - prosperity, a beautiful land; you earned your freedom and what did you do with it? You gave it up. This is a wake-up call. Whether you triumph or fail is up to you." And from the way it looks to me, it's not good, though I am ever hopeful.
Katharine
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Sir, I understand everything you said and I worry, also, about our country and I am angry at those determined to destroy it. Sometimes I wonder if God isn't saying, "I gave you everything - prosperity, a beautiful land; you earned your freedom and what did you do with it? You gave it up. This is a wake-up call. Whether you triumph or fail is up to you." And from the way it looks to me, it's not good, though I am ever hopeful.
Katharine
Comment Written 29-May-2022
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Jaybird,
Your excellent poem sums up the sad state of affairs of the world. But like you, I think as a people we'll survive. I believe, though that people are still blessed--that we are living in God's graces. I believe He still loves us.
I love your poetry, Jaybird. It's always so thought provoking and genuine.
Good luck!
You're in my prayers for good health and happiness.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Jaybird,
Your excellent poem sums up the sad state of affairs of the world. But like you, I think as a people we'll survive. I believe, though that people are still blessed--that we are living in God's graces. I believe He still loves us.
I love your poetry, Jaybird. It's always so thought provoking and genuine.
Good luck!
You're in my prayers for good health and happiness.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 29-May-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
based on media reports, the world is lost. Very few winning stories are aired. It is like they do not care, and I don't believe bad news gets them better ratings, and neither do they for they haven't tried a steady diet of it.
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based on media reports, the world is lost. Very few winning stories are aired. It is like they do not care, and I don't believe bad news gets them better ratings, and neither do they for they haven't tried a steady diet of it.
Comment Written 29-May-2022
Comment from Pearl Edwards
When it's all collected into one write it really does feel like our world has seen its best days, but I like to think
we will survive. Stay safe, cheers
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When it's all collected into one write it really does feel like our world has seen its best days, but I like to think
we will survive. Stay safe, cheers
Comment Written 29-May-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Jay,
This is a good poem about how humans have weakened their world by being Carlos's and ignoring the problems they're causing. Your last stanza's first line seems so true.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Jay,
This is a good poem about how humans have weakened their world by being Carlos's and ignoring the problems they're causing. Your last stanza's first line seems so true.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 28-May-2022
Comment from Boogienights
I have to believe that things will get better...I have to because I have a new baby granddaughter. I think where's there's life there's hope. A great ending full of hope.
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I have to believe that things will get better...I have to because I have a new baby granddaughter. I think where's there's life there's hope. A great ending full of hope.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
Comment from WriterHeather
I hope you are right. The world truly is in a mess and I fear for my nieces future. ..she's only two months old. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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I hope you are right. The world truly is in a mess and I fear for my nieces future. ..she's only two months old. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
