Ode to Mrs. Dixon
Dedicated to my favorite teacher25 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
It sounds like she was a very great teacher indeed. It's great that you still see her from time to time. Thank you for sharing this story here, and best wishes.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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It sounds like she was a very great teacher indeed. It's great that you still see her from time to time. Thank you for sharing this story here, and best wishes.
Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you. I took second in the contest. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Bridge
A wonderful ode to your favourite teacher. You were very lucky to have Mrs Dixon. Very well written. I was with you every step of my way. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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A wonderful ode to your favourite teacher. You were very lucky to have Mrs Dixon. Very well written. I was with you every step of my way. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you. I took second in the contest. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from LisaMay
It is a tribute to a great teacher that she could inspire your future vocation. Racism holds many able people back, so I was pleased to see what a successful teacher Mrs. Dixon was - respected by all. Starting out as the first African-American teacher in a rural district in Mississippi in the 1960s would have been a tough start. She clearly had the ability to use her 'Midas touch'.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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It is a tribute to a great teacher that she could inspire your future vocation. Racism holds many able people back, so I was pleased to see what a successful teacher Mrs. Dixon was - respected by all. Starting out as the first African-American teacher in a rural district in Mississippi in the 1960s would have been a tough start. She clearly had the ability to use her 'Midas touch'.
Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you Lisa. I took second in the contest. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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I reckon you deserved to win.
Comment from Kit Davis
Ms. Dixon (excuse me, DR. Dixon) sounds like a special lady indeed. It's not every day we meet someone with such a gift for life they can impact us simply by being there for us.
As for the writing itself, sometimes the narrative felt a little rushed. Some pieces of information didn't seem to flow with the story. However, overall it's a wonderful story and I can see your love for your special teacher in every bit. I'm glad that you knew her and could tell us about her.
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reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Ms. Dixon (excuse me, DR. Dixon) sounds like a special lady indeed. It's not every day we meet someone with such a gift for life they can impact us simply by being there for us.
As for the writing itself, sometimes the narrative felt a little rushed. Some pieces of information didn't seem to flow with the story. However, overall it's a wonderful story and I can see your love for your special teacher in every bit. I'm glad that you knew her and could tell us about her.
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Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you. I took second in the contest. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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So glad you got recognized! Be blessed.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I like the depth of you essay - it's not just a sentimental piece about your own experience (and a very heartfelt one, at that), but also a bit of a bio of a historically significant person who's still bettering lives today. An excellent essay and a very engrossing read.
Mike
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reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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I like the depth of you essay - it's not just a sentimental piece about your own experience (and a very heartfelt one, at that), but also a bit of a bio of a historically significant person who's still bettering lives today. An excellent essay and a very engrossing read.
Mike
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Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you Mike. I took second in the contest. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
