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Ode to Mrs. Dixon

Dedicated to my favorite teacher

25 total reviews 
Comment from ShirleyT1
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What a beautiful story! Ms. Dixon sounds like an amazing teacher in a time period that had to be difficult for her. I love the last paragraph - I don't know whether to say she has the Midas touch or she's spreading the magic. Both seem fitting because everything she touches turns to gold and if you spend any time with her, you'll come under her spell. Great job!

 Comment Written 28-May-2022


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Comment from dmt1967
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(I remember that fondly because seventh grade me played Santa Claus.) This doesn't make sense. (I remember fondly playing Santa Claus in seventh grade.)

While other English classes were diagraming sentences, ours was reading (When the Legends Die) by Hal Borland. Because this is a book title it should be written ('When the Legends Die',) otherwise it runs into the previous sentence.

Great story, which is why I gave it a five. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Take care.

 Comment Written 28-May-2022


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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Thank you for sharing this great tribute to Mrs.
Dixon. You describe an amazing woman or an Angel. You were fortunate to have had her in your life. I really enjoyed reading your story.




 Comment Written 27-May-2022


reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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reply by Carolyn Dooley on 27-May-2022
    You are welcome.

Comment from joann r romei
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This was beautiful, i always say a teacher can change and inspire a child's life, you were lucky to have had the priviledge to be her student at such a young age.

 Comment Written 26-May-2022


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Comment from Paul McFarland
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This is a really good story and brings back memories of my eighth grade teacher. I had two great teachers in my life. Mr. Clyde Swett was my eighth grade teacher, and Dr. Howard Eves was a math professor that I had in college. Both inspired me to become a teacher. Both taught me lessons in living a good life as well as academic lessons.

 Comment Written 25-May-2022


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Comment from Teri7
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I enjoyed what you have written about Dr. Armendia Dixon. She looked like she would have been a really good teacher. I am glad you had that experience with someone like her. Thank you for sharing this with us. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thank you very much Teri. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by Teri7 on 26-May-2022
    You are so welcome Earl. I hope all is going well for you my friend!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Nicely written. Good work.
This is a great tribute. Hope she gets to read it.
I remember that fondly because seventh grade me played Santa Claus. - 'me' - oops
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 25-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello mystery writer a good day to you. I hope all is well. Thanks for sharing your story, I liked it, made me think of my favorite teacher. It was my English teacher from Highschool. Funny how you don't realize the impact someone has on your life until years later or after their gone. Good Job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Comment from Wendy G
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She sounds both amazing and inspirational. Definitely the sort of teacher one never forgets. Your enthusiastic writing brought her to life. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Words seem inadequate and aren't enough to express how you appreciated what Dixon, and for your information you did well with your kind words in sharing memories.

 Comment Written 25-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.