Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

I enjoyed this poem of perseverance through self-doubt, which is something I'm sure most readers can relate to.

My only question is for this line:
"Never Ill willed wrongly I'll write"

With this particular font, it would be more easily read as
"Never ill-willed, wrongly I'll write"

with a lowercase i, comma, and a hyphen.

Cheers!
Erika

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 24-May-2022

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Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

I like the theme of determination in this, of that dogged belief that keeps us going no matter what. If you're driven to write, then you will!

I saw a couple of things that might have been spags but, given the meaning of your poem, I'm assuming they were intended ironically.

Mike

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 24-May-2022

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

When I first started here I was terrified to post, there were so many talented writers, I wrote a poem called "Cringe" and that's what happened, I cringed, so well done with your poem in mono rhyme, and the same, one has to choose the "right" rhyme and you did. Well done, blessings Roy
Query : throwing a my left as I write. 2: still in its (site) sight?

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 24-May-2022

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reply by royowen on 24-May-2022

Most welcome

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

QC,
I assume, because of the title, the grammatical errors are purposely done in this poem about why you write. The reasons are why most of us write.
If the errors are not on purpose, you don't need the 'a' in the last line of stanza two and it's should be its and toes should be toes'.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dp

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 24-May-2022

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reply by dragonpoet on 24-May-2022

You?re welcome on both accounts, QC.
Joan

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi QC,
Great little ditty for this rhyming contest.
To have a mono rhyme in quadrants and make it work is no easy feat... so well done.

I'd just go back into edit and fix up a little typo with a missing apostrophe, or added word?
Never 'ILL' will wrongly I'll write.

But I guess even that goes with your theme?

All the very best in this contest QC.

With our thoughts we create...
a spontaneous flow.

Kind regards,
James.

 Comment Written 21-May-2022

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reply by the author on 24-May-2022

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