I Love You, Dad
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Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice tribute to your father. I can identify with this. I was always at work, but today I have a great relationship with my two sons. I got lucky and had a great wife to fill in for me.
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Nice tribute to your father. I can identify with this. I was always at work, but today I have a great relationship with my two sons. I got lucky and had a great wife to fill in for me.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
A wonderful tribute to your father Jaybird. He loved his family and his actions showed that love. After all, the word love is a verb and a verb requires action.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
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A wonderful tribute to your father Jaybird. He loved his family and his actions showed that love. After all, the word love is a verb and a verb requires action.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-May-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I enjoyed this poem. It's obvious you think closely about your rhyme scheme because it doesn't seem forced. If you don't mind, why did you elect to end this sweet poem by saying love would not light the darkest night?
Speaking of love is kind and right-
But 'twill not light the darkest night.
Thank you for sharing.
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I enjoyed this poem. It's obvious you think closely about your rhyme scheme because it doesn't seem forced. If you don't mind, why did you elect to end this sweet poem by saying love would not light the darkest night?
Speaking of love is kind and right-
But 'twill not light the darkest night.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a great tribute to your father. So glad you knew he loved you by the way he cared for you, even though he did not put it into words. It is great to hear the words, "I love you" but actions do speak louder than words.
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This is a great tribute to your father. So glad you knew he loved you by the way he cared for you, even though he did not put it into words. It is great to hear the words, "I love you" but actions do speak louder than words.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
Comment from Whitewave
jaybird1,
Yes, actions speak louder than words. Sometimes, we can see or hear the words embedded in the action. However, to actually experience the words spoken to us is an indelible note softly etched into the heart.
Love is a fire that can burn through the darkest night.
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jaybird1,
Yes, actions speak louder than words. Sometimes, we can see or hear the words embedded in the action. However, to actually experience the words spoken to us is an indelible note softly etched into the heart.
Love is a fire that can burn through the darkest night.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
Comment from 1Dreamer
Beautifully said! Words can be empty if there are no actions to back it up. You were fortunate as I was that we had parents who truly loved and knew what it meant. We could never be poor for we had love.
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Beautifully said! Words can be empty if there are no actions to back it up. You were fortunate as I was that we had parents who truly loved and knew what it meant. We could never be poor for we had love.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
Hi Jay bird,
My dad is much the same. He refuses to say the words, but I have always felt loved by him. I love your poem. A nice remembrance of your father.
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Hi Jay bird,
My dad is much the same. He refuses to say the words, but I have always felt loved by him. I love your poem. A nice remembrance of your father.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is interesting and beautiful. I like your poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is interesting and beautiful. I like your poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 21-May-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
--An awesome poem with a great presentation and imagery. It flows well with beautifully descriptive words that paint a clear poetic vision.
--The form is well executed.
--The theme of Father's love is moving.
--What I like best is that you still remember him fondly.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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--An awesome poem with a great presentation and imagery. It flows well with beautifully descriptive words that paint a clear poetic vision.
--The form is well executed.
--The theme of Father's love is moving.
--What I like best is that you still remember him fondly.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 21-May-2022
Comment from royowen
That's probably why you turned out with a great attitude to life and love, and worthwhile things. You have an exceptional code to good things, and you are humble and well meaning person, well done, blessings Roy
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That's probably why you turned out with a great attitude to life and love, and worthwhile things. You have an exceptional code to good things, and you are humble and well meaning person, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-May-2022
