Mr & Mrs Steele
witty poem4 total reviews
Comment from Rebel Jim
Nice little witty ditty,
that says a lot in those few words.
I didn't come across any faults with your piece.
My compliments... "Keep on Writin'!"
Ciao
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
  |
Nice little witty ditty,
that says a lot in those few words.
I didn't come across any faults with your piece.
My compliments... "Keep on Writin'!"
Ciao
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
-
Ciao Rebel!
I noticed that many entries were very wordy , 5/ 6 even more lines long which I feel defeats the purpose .. the challenge is to say something witty in the less words possible .. tombstones do have a limited space after all. ( biggrin)
I don?t think my entry was really worth 6 stars but thank you , I do appreciate the support, Rebel.
You haven?t been posting much lately, hope you are coping with the pandemic.
The war in Ukraine and the sanction ( which are harming more Europe/Italy than Russia) is crippling our factories .. the cost of gas is too high.. the pandemic killed 70% of our small / medium businesses, now the war is making our factories close down.
The future is bleak and America is doing its best to keep the war going..
it wants to weaken Russia s military and economy with a long war. Meantime though Europe /Italy are sinking.
Take care Rebel!
Comment from rhonnie69
Ciao master poet: I thank you for posting your wee witty ditty here. This is just what I needed. Confirmation that I am right. While resting in peace...Miss hard to get...relentless yet...for the love of my life...is my best bet. I told you...when we met...you, I would never forget...we have a life-long bond...until the end...and beyond. Yes...I really care...Yes...I'll always be there." Yes...you know me. I know you're glad we met. Yours truly...me.
|
Ciao master poet: I thank you for posting your wee witty ditty here. This is just what I needed. Confirmation that I am right. While resting in peace...Miss hard to get...relentless yet...for the love of my life...is my best bet. I told you...when we met...you, I would never forget...we have a life-long bond...until the end...and beyond. Yes...I really care...Yes...I'll always be there." Yes...you know me. I know you're glad we met. Yours truly...me.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
Comment from rspoet
This an excellent epitaph for the Mr and Mrs Steele
Seems they remain true to their nature in death as in life.
Good choice of art work to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
 |
This an excellent epitaph for the Mr and Mrs Steele
Seems they remain true to their nature in death as in life.
Good choice of art work to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 20-May-2022
Comment from jessizero
Your epitaphs for Mr. and Mrs. Steele made me chuckle. I can't imagine this actually going on a tombstone - I am glad this is fictional! Thanks for sharing this here.
|
Your epitaphs for Mr. and Mrs. Steele made me chuckle. I can't imagine this actually going on a tombstone - I am glad this is fictional! Thanks for sharing this here.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
